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Re: Haiku Tag

PostPosted: Tue Aug 23, 2016 11:06 pm
by Meno_
discerning landscape!

Shadows blue, deference who?

Tell, why, do you shew.

Re: Haiku Tag

PostPosted: Wed Aug 24, 2016 1:39 am
by Ultimate Philosophy 1001
Arcturus Descending wrote:
Ultimate Philosophy 1001 wrote:
Arcturus Descending wrote:
:lol: The lord has spoken.


I am a lord, but only your lord. :-$


I see. :lol: So when it is convenient for you, Trixie, you become lord not - what is it lordess? lol

I have no lord. I serve no one except perhaps only that within myself which calls to me...my Self.


And that is precisely why you need me to be your lord. :-k

Re: Haiku Tag

PostPosted: Thu Aug 25, 2016 4:35 pm
by MagsJ
Tell, why, do you shew

Best to keep the self within?

Bound by need and want.

Re: Haiku Tag

PostPosted: Thu Aug 25, 2016 4:47 pm
by Arcturus Descending
Bound by need and want

a precarious journey

he blindly pursued.

Re: Haiku Tag

PostPosted: Thu Aug 25, 2016 6:24 pm
by Fixed Cross
He blindly pursued
the snake through the garbagebelt
and cut his right foot.

Re: Haiku Tag

PostPosted: Tue Aug 30, 2016 11:43 pm
by MagsJ
and cut his right foot
still walking the path most trod
despite the hazards

Re: Haiku Tag

PostPosted: Thu Sep 01, 2016 9:54 am
by Meno_
despite the hazards

The heart will conquer in-spite

enormous loss, appearent

Re: Haiku Tag

PostPosted: Thu Sep 01, 2016 11:36 pm
by Lev Muishkin
jerkey wrote:despite the hazards

The heart will conquer in-spite

enormous loss, appearent



Enormous loss apparent.
never transparent
but obscure though each lived day

Re: Haiku Tag

PostPosted: Fri Sep 02, 2016 4:28 pm
by Ierrellus
Reminder for haiku--syllables 5-7-5.

Re: Haiku Tag

PostPosted: Tue Sep 06, 2016 10:19 pm
by Lev Muishkin
Ierrellus wrote:Reminder for haiku--syllables 5-7-5.



Enormous loss apparent.
but obscure though each lived day
never transparent

Re: Haiku Tag

PostPosted: Thu Sep 08, 2016 4:07 am
by Meno_
never transparent

Enormous loss for some gain

Shone some one many

Re: Haiku Tag

PostPosted: Fri Sep 09, 2016 10:56 am
by Lev Muishkin
jerkey wrote:never transparent

Enormous loss for some gain

Shone some one many


Shone some one many
Confused Incoherence is
hard to follow well

Re: Haiku Tag

PostPosted: Fri Sep 09, 2016 11:28 pm
by Ecmandu
Fucking blasphemy
Eternally damned just for
Living a life here

Re: Haiku Tag

PostPosted: Sat Sep 10, 2016 12:32 am
by MagsJ
Lev Muishkin wrote:hard to follow well

Hard to follow well

Keeping up with the other

Don't watch them, watch you.

Re: Haiku Tag

PostPosted: Sat Sep 10, 2016 7:54 pm
by Meno_
MagsJ wrote:
Lev Muishkin wrote:hard to follow well

Hard to follow well

Keeping up with the other



Don't watch them, watch you.




Don't watch them, watch you.





Lest timber in thy eye blind








Unto children's play

Re: Haiku Tag

PostPosted: Sat Sep 10, 2016 10:46 pm
by MagsJ
jerkey wrote:Unto child play

..one syllable short ;)

Re: Haiku Tag

PostPosted: Sat Sep 10, 2016 11:27 pm
by Meno_
MagsJ wrote:
jerkey wrote:Unto child play

..one syllable short ;)




Gad's I was right, You Are a perfectionist, hands down. Wouldn't have thought You'd see it.

Clever double down.

Re: Haiku Tag

PostPosted: Sun Sep 11, 2016 2:03 am
by MagsJ
jerkey wrote:
MagsJ wrote:..one syllable short ;)
Gad's I was right, You Are a perfectionist, hands down. Wouldn't have thought You'd see it.
Guess I'm just a stickler for the rules when it comes to such things...


Unto children's play

Enough time for adult things

Lost years remain lost

Re: Haiku Tag

PostPosted: Sun Sep 11, 2016 9:06 pm
by Meno_
Lost years remain lost


How ever recaptured in time


As they must all ways

Re: Haiku Tag

PostPosted: Thu Sep 15, 2016 1:34 pm
by Ierrellus
jerkey wrote:Lost years remain lost


How ever recaptured in time


As they must all ways

The second line has eight syllables. Haiku pattern remains 5--7--5.

Re: Haiku Tag

PostPosted: Sun Sep 18, 2016 1:12 am
by MagsJ
As they must all ways

As one way is not enough

Many roads to take

Re: Haiku Tag

PostPosted: Mon Sep 19, 2016 3:05 am
by Meno_
Many roads to take
But only one at a time
Other ones let go

Re: Haiku Tag

PostPosted: Thu Sep 29, 2016 4:56 pm
by Pezerocles
Other ones let go
I can see these here hanging
A second longer

Re: Haiku Tag

PostPosted: Thu Sep 29, 2016 6:26 pm
by Meno_
A second longer
Appears as Eternity
time flows 4 ward's keep

Re: Haiku Tag

PostPosted: Thu Sep 29, 2016 7:01 pm
by Pezerocles
Time flows 4 ward's keep
Into the depths of oceans
Ward 3 is jealous