Haiku Tag

Elevate form over function to get at less easily articulable truths.

Re: Haiku Tag

Postby jonquil » Sat Dec 10, 2011 2:35 am

Wherein lies a beast
blood gallops without a thought
for the chains of love.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby FilmSnob » Sun Dec 11, 2011 6:11 am

The chain of love
On toasty bread doth lie
When baked flour.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Trevor » Sun Dec 11, 2011 11:22 am

:oops:

nevermind.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby jonquil » Fri Dec 16, 2011 2:48 pm

Baked flour turns brown
like human skin in the sun
or a fired oven.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Oughtist » Thu Jan 19, 2012 4:40 am

ora, fired oven
collective mouth blows hot air
polar ice caps melt
If the sin can be despised and not the sinner, can the belief be ridiculed and not the believer?
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby anon » Thu Jan 19, 2012 6:32 pm

polar ice caps melt
oceanic conveyor
belt: a chilling thought
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Oughtist » Fri Jan 20, 2012 6:52 am

belt: a chilling thought
freeze mind with scotch on the rocks
have a drink on me
If the sin can be despised and not the sinner, can the belief be ridiculed and not the believer?
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby anon » Thu Jan 26, 2012 7:25 pm

Have a drink on me.
I will drink too. We will all
drink each others' drinks.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Arcturus Descending » Fri Jan 27, 2012 3:41 pm

anon wrote:Have a drink on me.
I will drink too. We will all
drink each others' drinks.

anon, are you drunk at this moment? :lol: :P
I will have a Sangria - on you - but do you really think that because you buy me a drink, I have to share my drink with you?
As my friend, Kahlil said - Fill each other's cup but drink not from one cup.
Isn't that beautiful - Kahlil makes me happy. :)
~ Carlos Ruiz Zafon

“One of the pitfalls of childhood is that one doesn't have to understand something to feel it. By the time the mind is able to comprehend what has happened, the wounds of the heart are already too deep.”

“But in good time you'll see that sometimes what matters isn't what one gives but what one gives up.”

A room without books ..is like a body without a soul.”

“I couldn't help thinking that if I, by pure chance, had found a whole universe in a single unknown book, buried in that endless necropolis, tens of thousands more would remain unexplored, forgotten forever. I felt myself surrounded by millions of abandoned pages, by worlds and souls without an owner sinking in an ocean of darkness, while the world that throbbed outside the library seemed to be losing its memory, day after day, unknowingly, feeling all the wiser the more it forgot.”
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Arcturus Descending » Fri Jan 27, 2012 3:44 pm

drink each others' drinks.
What is to be said for this?
Hearts and spirits shared.
:roll:
~ Carlos Ruiz Zafon

“One of the pitfalls of childhood is that one doesn't have to understand something to feel it. By the time the mind is able to comprehend what has happened, the wounds of the heart are already too deep.”

“But in good time you'll see that sometimes what matters isn't what one gives but what one gives up.”

A room without books ..is like a body without a soul.”

“I couldn't help thinking that if I, by pure chance, had found a whole universe in a single unknown book, buried in that endless necropolis, tens of thousands more would remain unexplored, forgotten forever. I felt myself surrounded by millions of abandoned pages, by worlds and souls without an owner sinking in an ocean of darkness, while the world that throbbed outside the library seemed to be losing its memory, day after day, unknowingly, feeling all the wiser the more it forgot.”
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby jonquil » Sat Jan 28, 2012 1:17 am

Hearts and spirits shared,
consolation of Daguerre
shrined in sepia.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby anon » Sat Jan 28, 2012 1:24 am

Arcturus Descending wrote:
anon wrote:Have a drink on me.
I will drink too. We will all
drink each others' drinks.

anon, are you drunk at this moment? :lol: :P
I will have a Sangria - on you - but do you really think that because you buy me a drink, I have to share my drink with you?
As my friend, Kahlil said - Fill each other's cup but drink not from one cup.
Isn't that beautiful - Kahlil makes me happy. :)

At this moment, yes, but not that one. Wish I was. Who is this "Kahlil"?
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Arcturus Descending » Sat Jan 28, 2012 3:20 pm

anon wrote:
Arcturus Descending wrote:
anon wrote:Have a drink on me.
I will drink too. We will all
drink each others' drinks.

anon, are you drunk at this moment? :lol: :P
I will have a Sangria - on you - but do you really think that because you buy me a drink, I have to share my drink with you?
As my friend, Kahlil said - Fill each other's cup but drink not from one cup.
Isn't that beautiful - Kahlil makes me happy. :)

At this moment, yes, but not that one. Wish I was. Who is this "Kahlil"?

Why, anon, were you drunk 'at this moment' and what was it that you were drinking? :evilfun:
But perhaps I misunderstand you here. Maybe it was within the sound of a Chopin or a Debussy that you found your inebriation.
Who is this Kahlil?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! #-o :roll: :-? Only kidding, of course...this guy...

On Children
by Kahlil Gibran

Your children are not your children.
They are the sons and daughters of Life's longing for itself.
They come through you but not from you,
And though they are with you, yet they belong not to you.

You may give them your love but not your thoughts.
For they have their own thoughts.
You may house their bodies but not their souls,
For their souls dwell in the house of tomorrow,
which you cannot visit, not even in your dreams.
You may strive to be like them, but seek not to make them like you.
For life goes not backward nor tarries with yesterday.

You are the bows from which your children as living arrows are sent forth.
The archer sees the mark upon the path of the infinite,
and He bends you with His might that His arrows may go swift and far.
Let your bending in the archer's hand be for gladness;
For even as He loves the arrow that flies,
so He loves also the bow that is stable.

So beautiful...and can you just imagine the world today if we lived that wisdom? Perhaps each generation would contribute to a world that is not now...but is getting there... [-o<
~ Carlos Ruiz Zafon

“One of the pitfalls of childhood is that one doesn't have to understand something to feel it. By the time the mind is able to comprehend what has happened, the wounds of the heart are already too deep.”

“But in good time you'll see that sometimes what matters isn't what one gives but what one gives up.”

A room without books ..is like a body without a soul.”

“I couldn't help thinking that if I, by pure chance, had found a whole universe in a single unknown book, buried in that endless necropolis, tens of thousands more would remain unexplored, forgotten forever. I felt myself surrounded by millions of abandoned pages, by worlds and souls without an owner sinking in an ocean of darkness, while the world that throbbed outside the library seemed to be losing its memory, day after day, unknowingly, feeling all the wiser the more it forgot.”
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby anon » Mon Jan 30, 2012 3:18 pm

That really is beautiful, Arc.

shrined in sepia
disparate resolutions
work well together
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby _________ » Mon Jan 30, 2012 4:31 pm

Work well together--
Through contrast, Chiaroscuro,
Limning yang and yin.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby anon » Mon Jan 30, 2012 6:40 pm

limning yang and yin,
snow-covered mountains brighten
heavy, brooding clouds
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Oughtist » Thu Mar 08, 2012 1:41 am

heavy, brooding clouds
moping over icy peaks
the plain eyes thirsty
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Ichthus » Fri Apr 06, 2012 5:44 am

the plain eyes thirsty
moisture for home-grown apples
the sky descending
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Arcturus Descending » Sat Apr 07, 2012 2:53 pm

the sky descending
blue absorbing all there is
and joy runs rampant!
~ Carlos Ruiz Zafon

“One of the pitfalls of childhood is that one doesn't have to understand something to feel it. By the time the mind is able to comprehend what has happened, the wounds of the heart are already too deep.”

“But in good time you'll see that sometimes what matters isn't what one gives but what one gives up.”

A room without books ..is like a body without a soul.”

“I couldn't help thinking that if I, by pure chance, had found a whole universe in a single unknown book, buried in that endless necropolis, tens of thousands more would remain unexplored, forgotten forever. I felt myself surrounded by millions of abandoned pages, by worlds and souls without an owner sinking in an ocean of darkness, while the world that throbbed outside the library seemed to be losing its memory, day after day, unknowingly, feeling all the wiser the more it forgot.”
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby felix dakat » Sun Apr 08, 2012 7:34 pm

Arcturus Descending wrote:the sky descending
blue absorbing all there is
and joy runs rampant!


Beautiful image Arcturus!

and Joy runs rampant!
straight toward the generator
Danger High Voltage!
iPhone, therefore, I am.

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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Arcturus Descending » Mon Apr 09, 2012 2:53 pm

Thank you, FELIX, but look where you took it. :-?
:lol:

Danger High Voltage!
I'm a runnin from his sparks
No, go back! Go back!
~ Carlos Ruiz Zafon

“One of the pitfalls of childhood is that one doesn't have to understand something to feel it. By the time the mind is able to comprehend what has happened, the wounds of the heart are already too deep.”

“But in good time you'll see that sometimes what matters isn't what one gives but what one gives up.”

A room without books ..is like a body without a soul.”

“I couldn't help thinking that if I, by pure chance, had found a whole universe in a single unknown book, buried in that endless necropolis, tens of thousands more would remain unexplored, forgotten forever. I felt myself surrounded by millions of abandoned pages, by worlds and souls without an owner sinking in an ocean of darkness, while the world that throbbed outside the library seemed to be losing its memory, day after day, unknowingly, feeling all the wiser the more it forgot.”
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby anon » Tue Apr 10, 2012 6:23 pm

No, go back! Go back!
Ends are sticky; beginnings
Flow like sap in spring
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby jonquil » Tue Apr 10, 2012 7:14 pm

Flow like sap in spring --
then break in waves as penguins
jump high onto ice.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby anon » Tue Apr 10, 2012 7:42 pm

jump high onto ice
double blades strapped to cold feet
as in days of yore
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Ichthus » Sat Apr 14, 2012 6:46 am

as in days of yore
the seed springs up eternal
drawn toward the heights
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