Critique My Philosophy of Life?

Over the past several years, I have created my philosophy of life, a 15-page document that presents my positions on topics ranging from general ontology to political philosophy. My main conclusion is that peace of mind should be my primary goal, and roughly half of the document is dedicated toward discussing ways to achieve and maintain peace of mind. The document is presented in outline form and is very concise.

Would anyone like to read and critique my philosophy? If so, please e-mail me at philosofer123@yahoo.com, and I will send the document to you.