Haiku Tag

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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby jonquil » Sun Oct 16, 2011 4:48 pm

Spilt upon the floor
Starlight through open windows
Eyes of the cosmos.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Oughtist » Sun Oct 16, 2011 6:54 pm

Eyes of the cosmos
See through the illusive light
to dark intervals
If the sin can be despised and not the sinner, can the belief be ridiculed and not the believer?
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby anon » Mon Oct 17, 2011 5:43 pm

to dark intervals,
white sunlight - steam gathering
shadows together
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Oughtist » Tue Oct 18, 2011 1:36 am

shadows together
form striking shady unions
bodies can't manage
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby anon » Tue Oct 18, 2011 8:20 pm

bodies can't manage
growth, change, constant upheavals
of old age, and death
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Oughtist » Wed Oct 19, 2011 6:43 am

of old age, and death,
a mind is of a mind too
think of something else
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby anon » Thu Oct 20, 2011 6:43 pm

think of something else.
she didn't even know you,
but still, you were hooked
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Oughtist » Fri Oct 21, 2011 7:17 am

but still, you were hooked
the moment you moved, helpless,
barbed by anima
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Arcturus Descending » Fri Oct 21, 2011 2:24 pm

barbed by anima
ever conscious must he be
or wounded still - she!
~ Carlos Ruiz Zafon

“One of the pitfalls of childhood is that one doesn't have to understand something to feel it. By the time the mind is able to comprehend what has happened, the wounds of the heart are already too deep.”

“But in good time you'll see that sometimes what matters isn't what one gives but what one gives up.”

A room without books ..is like a body without a soul.”

“I couldn't help thinking that if I, by pure chance, had found a whole universe in a single unknown book, buried in that endless necropolis, tens of thousands more would remain unexplored, forgotten forever. I felt myself surrounded by millions of abandoned pages, by worlds and souls without an owner sinking in an ocean of darkness, while the world that throbbed outside the library seemed to be losing its memory, day after day, unknowingly, feeling all the wiser the more it forgot.”
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby anon » Mon Oct 24, 2011 2:26 pm

"or wounded still", she
said so mysteriously
(a slow way to die)
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Arcturus Descending » Mon Oct 24, 2011 3:22 pm

hello anon :)
how are we today?

(a slow way to die)
stepping out of the moment -
step back in - reborn!
~ Carlos Ruiz Zafon

“One of the pitfalls of childhood is that one doesn't have to understand something to feel it. By the time the mind is able to comprehend what has happened, the wounds of the heart are already too deep.”

“But in good time you'll see that sometimes what matters isn't what one gives but what one gives up.”

A room without books ..is like a body without a soul.”

“I couldn't help thinking that if I, by pure chance, had found a whole universe in a single unknown book, buried in that endless necropolis, tens of thousands more would remain unexplored, forgotten forever. I felt myself surrounded by millions of abandoned pages, by worlds and souls without an owner sinking in an ocean of darkness, while the world that throbbed outside the library seemed to be losing its memory, day after day, unknowingly, feeling all the wiser the more it forgot.”
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby anon » Mon Oct 24, 2011 5:07 pm

I'm great, ww, thanks!

step back in, reborn
as a fish, or a turtle -
such pristine blue worlds
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Evening » Tue Oct 25, 2011 2:50 pm

such pristine blue worlds
where the sky becomes evening -
a perfect marriage!
:lol:
Be humble for you are made of earth. Be noble for you are made of stars. - Serbian proverb

Teach me your mood, O patient stars. Who climb each night, the ancient sky.
leaving on space no shade, no scars, no trace of age, no fear to die. - Ralph Waldo Emerson

Ye stars! Which are the poetry of heaven! - Lord Byron

I have loved the stars too fondly to be fearful of the night. - Sarah Williams

Quietly, like a night bird, floating, soaring, wingless
We glide from shore to shore, curving and falling but not quite touching;
Earth: a distant memory seen in an instant of repose,
crescent shaped, ethereal, beautiful, I wonder which part is home,
but I know it doesn't matter . . . the bond is there in my mind and memory;
Earth: a small, bubbly balloon hanging delicately in the nothingness of space. - Alfred Worden
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby anon » Tue Oct 25, 2011 3:30 pm

a perfect marriage,
a cloudless sky. These happen
occasionally
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Skymning » Thu Oct 27, 2011 1:21 pm

Occasionally,
one does only what one should --
that is, by accident

(again, profiting from the fact that haikus don't always correspond to the 5-7-5 "rule")
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby anon » Thu Oct 27, 2011 1:35 pm

that is, by accident -
the only explanation
for the pain we cause
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Arcturus Descending » Fri Oct 28, 2011 2:14 pm

for the pain we cause
Orestes' knew the madness
Sang Sang - absolve me!
~ Carlos Ruiz Zafon

“One of the pitfalls of childhood is that one doesn't have to understand something to feel it. By the time the mind is able to comprehend what has happened, the wounds of the heart are already too deep.”

“But in good time you'll see that sometimes what matters isn't what one gives but what one gives up.”

A room without books ..is like a body without a soul.”

“I couldn't help thinking that if I, by pure chance, had found a whole universe in a single unknown book, buried in that endless necropolis, tens of thousands more would remain unexplored, forgotten forever. I felt myself surrounded by millions of abandoned pages, by worlds and souls without an owner sinking in an ocean of darkness, while the world that throbbed outside the library seemed to be losing its memory, day after day, unknowingly, feeling all the wiser the more it forgot.”
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby anon » Fri Oct 28, 2011 3:34 pm

Sangsang, absolve me
Spoonman, save me - or Jesus,
if that does the trick
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Evening » Sat Oct 29, 2011 3:26 pm

if that does the trick
then who am I to wonder
but ah - still I do!
Be humble for you are made of earth. Be noble for you are made of stars. - Serbian proverb

Teach me your mood, O patient stars. Who climb each night, the ancient sky.
leaving on space no shade, no scars, no trace of age, no fear to die. - Ralph Waldo Emerson

Ye stars! Which are the poetry of heaven! - Lord Byron

I have loved the stars too fondly to be fearful of the night. - Sarah Williams

Quietly, like a night bird, floating, soaring, wingless
We glide from shore to shore, curving and falling but not quite touching;
Earth: a distant memory seen in an instant of repose,
crescent shaped, ethereal, beautiful, I wonder which part is home,
but I know it doesn't matter . . . the bond is there in my mind and memory;
Earth: a small, bubbly balloon hanging delicately in the nothingness of space. - Alfred Worden
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby anon » Wed Nov 02, 2011 7:20 pm

but ah - still I do
walk upright, even when I
think like a monkey
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Oughtist » Thu Nov 03, 2011 6:03 am

think like a monkey
think like a monkey think like
a monkey think like
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby jonquil » Sat Nov 05, 2011 5:24 pm

Think like a monkey.
Time dissolves into muscle
turned in a wild vine.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Ierrellus » Mon Nov 07, 2011 2:55 pm

My muscles desolve
In time's recurrent space
Becoming new strength.
"We must love one another or die." W.H.Auden
I admit I'm an asshole. Now, can we get back to the conversation?
"If you linger to curse the snake that bit you, you will die of its poison."
Arrogance hides a multitude of insecurities."
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby _________ » Mon Nov 07, 2011 5:57 pm

Wild is two syllables, so I'll drop the "a".

Turned in wild vine,
Mere apes--impart to us, Claude,
Tonic Arabesques.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby aletheia » Mon Nov 07, 2011 6:48 pm

Tonic arabesques
Formly we in distinct time
Move different samely
'The daemonic genius is the only thing capable of surviving the odds of existence versus no existence... because of what it empirically tolerates though fundamentally defying it, the deepest existence is satyrical. The grin on a primordial sailor, grim to all things human, his enjoyment in the uncertainty. He knows himself by this very factor. Valuing the uncertainty of the universe as an extension of oneself - this sailor is the primordial being.' [Source]


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