The smell of roses

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The smell of roses

Postby Trevor » Fri Nov 04, 2011 6:40 pm

Is that the scent of roses I smell on this sweet morning?
No, it's life taking a piss in your face.
Last edited by Trevor on Fri Nov 04, 2011 6:44 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: The smell of roses

Postby Flannel Jesus » Fri Nov 04, 2011 6:43 pm

I've always been partial towards short poetry, good work!
Only thing I didn't like about it was the lack of a question mark in the appropriate place.
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Re: The smell of roses

Postby Trevor » Fri Nov 04, 2011 6:44 pm

noted.
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