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Flannel Jesus wrote:You really, really need to work on the redundancies in your writing (note: "really, really" is also a redundancy, but some redundancies can be useful -- that one is useful as an emphasizer).
eg:
self-direct themselves
self-organize themselves
Can anybody here tell me otherwise that this isn't the case?
Just sounds better and more intelligent, in the first two examples, to choose ONE instance of self. Choose self-organize, or organize themselves, not both.
In the last example, likewise, choose one: "Can anybody here tell me otherwise?" or "Can anybody here tell me that this isn't the case?"
Anyway, writing critique over---
I'm somewhat of an anarchist myself, and some of your writings actually make you look a bit like a statist sometimes, honestly. The form of anarchist that I would be were I truly dedicated to the whole thing can be described on each of these two pages, which are more or less synonymous: voluntarism / agorism
James L Walker wrote:I think the entire paradigm of anarchism versus government centralized ruling really amounts to self organization versus fascist direct rule in which those who excuse themselves through seizing power speak of their special entitlement or privilege of ruling others by managing their lives.
Oppression comes in the form where individuals having their lives managed for them become enslaved by those within power structure at the top.
Anarchists seek individual independence of self directing and ruling themselves through self organization where government supporters think that people should not be able to self organized themselves or that generally most people are unable to effectively in the manner that they like ideally.
The anarchist wants self organization and the ability to self direct themselves without interference where the typical government supporter of any kind respond with denying such desires.
Can anybody here tell me otherwise that this isn't the case?
Pezer wrote:Come now, clarity should be the only requirement and all of Joker's points are quite clear.
Flannel Jesus wrote:Pezer wrote:Come now, clarity should be the only requirement and all of Joker's points are quite clear.
Come now, Joker said he wants to be a published writer one day. I'm just giving him a hand. If he ever hopes to get published, he won't get away with that stuff then. Better to learn good practices sooner rather than later.
Pezer wrote:Flannel Jesus wrote:Pezer wrote:Come now, clarity should be the only requirement and all of Joker's points are quite clear.
Come now, Joker said he wants to be a published writer one day. I'm just giving him a hand. If he ever hopes to get published, he won't get away with that stuff then. Better to learn good practices sooner rather than later.
That's actually a good point.
Stoic Guardian wrote:Not to mention the fact that most governments have the consent (if not the love) of the people.
Pezer wrote:Stoic Guardian wrote:Not to mention the fact that most governments have the consent (if not the love) of the people.
I call Shennanigan.
Pezer wrote:Aslo Stoic, the person that needs Government to achieve their purpose is the weak one, not the other way around.
Stoic Guardian wrote:Not "need", so much as working together to achieve a goal.
Stoic Guardian wrote:If a significant number of the people are not in armed rebellion or near armed rebellion, I consider that consent.
Pezer wrote:Every single country in the world has a large part of its population engaging in constant armed rebellion.
Pezer wrote:Every single country in the world has a large part of its population engaging in constant armed rebellion.
Stoic Guardian wrote:Not the same government and not constantly at one place. Clash of interest is "constant" regardless of Government.
Stoic Guardian wrote:No, Why?
Pezer wrote:Stoic Guardian wrote:No, Why?
Because it is a common utterance amongst armed rebels in the US.
James L Walker wrote:I think the entire paradigm of anarchism versus government centralized ruling really amounts to self organization versus fascist direct rule in which those who excuse themselves through seizing power speak of their special entitlement or privilege of ruling others by managing their lives.
Oppression comes in the form where individuals having their lives managed for them become enslaved by those within power structure at the top.
Anarchists seek individual independence of self directing and ruling themselves through self organization where government supporters think that people should not be able to self organized themselves or that generally most people are unable to effectively in the manner that they like ideally.
The anarchist wants self organization and the ability to self direct themselves without interference
where the typical government supporter of any kind respond with denying such desires.
Can anybody here tell me otherwise that this isn't the case?
James L Walker wrote:I think the entire paradigm of anarchism versus government centralized ruling really amounts to self organization versus fascist direct rule in which those who excuse themselves through seizing power speak of their special entitlement or privilege of ruling others by managing their lives.
Oppression comes in the form where individuals having their lives managed for them become enslaved by those within power structure at the top.
Anarchists seek individual independence of self directing and ruling themselves through self organization where government supporters think that people should not be able to self organized themselves or that generally most people are unable to effectively in the manner that they like ideally.
The anarchist wants self organization and the ability to self direct themselves without interference where the typical government supporter of any kind respond with denying such desires.
Can anybody here tell me otherwise that this isn't the case?
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