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Here
I am
Being
What I don’t
Want
To be
is

i invite anyone to repeat this form with their own words if they feel like it.
(1.2.1.3.1.2.1–refers to syllabols).

the
changing
is
forgotten
by
staying
still

wow, i messed up. “being” is maybe not one syllabol. shucks. nice job siatd

maybe i should write:
“so” in place of “being”. or maybe i just say that the number are for words and not syllabols (so that siatd would have to write his all over again). wow. the possibilities, the problems.

this
little
life
form is far
far
to short,
look…

(ok, this is awful)

No offence Alexis, but what the hell are you talking about? I haven’t written a poem in months, except for a haiku I was obliged to do for my creative writing course…

Yeah I was sort of wondering what was going on too…

yeah, sorry. apparently i’m having some problems in the region above my neck. hopefully the problem will go away with time.

Sometimes I get the feeling Alex is higher than I am…

you mean superior right?
obviously not…

I can’t tell if you’re being a bitch or not there…

If not then I appologize.

not.
i don’t know how to escape this problem, especially bc i’ve had hard enough time with this thread already. maybe…

i
am not
too
bright sometimes
just
a bit
dull

or

if
speaking
fails
i must have
been
speaking
then

or maybe

when
we wake
up
we find we
are
falling
down

or

sir
gobbo
please
do not hate
me
i am
nice

i think that is the one.

:smiley:

I know, don’t pay too much attention to my wild ramblings.

Light
Must rise
Time
expanding
Dark
Quiet
spots

1213121 is a palindrome
Might I suggest the symmetrical inverse
3231323

Day lighting
crescents
through forest
tree
tops above
clutched
memories

Then,
They came.
Swift,
Over Dark hills.
Afraid.
Closing
In.

Inverted
patterns
Instigate
Slow
Yet valued
Mental
Images

I’m
so sorry
I
didn’t call.
want
to go
coffee?

I
Do not
think
I have a
life,
this is
proof.