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=D> …love it 
I’m sorry, but the chin-stroker in the sixth line ruins the flow for me. Amateur mistake in an otherwise accomplished foray into the world of verse.
Absolutely. Back to the drawing board. 
It’s the quintessential (sp?) “love” story, see… (this is the result of an empty house and not enough time to do something lengthy…)
She pretends to be shy, she plays hard to get, she plays the flirty bad-girl, but, then she has second thoughts and plays innocent (walks the line)–still, she leads him on and plays like it was all a joke… He doesn’t get it, feels like an idiot for not seeing through her from the beginning… this makes him bang his head against the wall to distract from his heart-break, and he comes out of it… he thinks… wiser for the next go-round, which he thinks he is certain to win. Alas, see chapter two.
So, Igor, the chin-stroker must stay.
…like the interpretation, Icht
Damn, you’re right. [Wonders how he didn’t see it the first time]
Well, the interp. was directed at anon. In the part directed to Igor, I wasn’t referring to Igor as the chin-stroker… I guess I worded the sentence wrong. Woops. I was replying to Igor saying, “the chin-stroker in the sixth line ruins the flow for me. Amateur mistake in an otherwise accomplished foray into the world of verse.”
Enjoy your Thanksgiving. Check out my book discussion in the Religion forum if you haven’t already.
Don’t worry Icht, I got it first time round and the interp. of Anon’s smiley story was a love-story at it’s very best… 
Are you serious? lol It (ahem … my interp.) would suck if that was the whole enchilada. Perhaps it has the makings of one, though, if they eventually get the point. Don’t get me started talking about food right now, though, or I just might toss my cookies.
Impressive Ichthus, impressive.