For someone who claims to have only just written his first poem with his last subm “SUNDAY TIMES”, you, faust, certainly don’t have to worry about falling pray to the always-dreaded Sophmore jinx, b/c you have written and shared yet another very good poem - shorter than the first and embodying a different mood but good nonetheless on its own terms.
bravisimo,
lhw - AKA: The Straight-faced Clown AKA: M.C. Tape-Hiss