A Night Like This

A Night Like This

It takes a quiet night.
A night like this.
You stop when the night
stops everything,
and listen to the silence.
It speaks.
It speaks
as from another world,
side by side,
so close to ours,
so close,
you wonder if maybe it’s here all the time.

It’s a loved one in the doorway, and
you didn’t know they were standing there.
So quiet,
so quiet.
Then something makes you look up
and it startles you at first.
But they smile so warm.
“When did you come in?”
Maybe they never left.
You should look up more.
And you would,
but it takes a night like this –
a quiet night,
this night,
this night of all nights.

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the poem is beautiful but

we know it’s nothing but a collection of words.

The day after tomorrow, this feeling will evaporate. It’s not supposed to last too long.

(ps: rainey, [size=85]that was just a comment, don’t think I’m trying to depress you)[/size]

I love how the stillness and serenity fill up this contemplation. This poem made me think of someone who is never far from my heart, especially at this time of year. The things that come to us when we slow down and soak up the quiet…

Your poetry is always a pleasure, Rainey. Happy holidays to you and your family.

It’s more than that, Fabiano. And there’s no reason it can’t last. It’s up to us. We create the veil. We can lift it.

Thank you, Anita. Merry Christmas to you and yours. :slight_smile:

Happy Christmas Rainey.

Happy Christmas, Tab.

Rainey, do you have anything published, like novels or books of poetry.

Simply PM me your name and I will find it on-line and buy it, I mean it.

Thanks, Pav. Nothing of any real significance published yet. I’m working on it. Should I ever have the great fortune of breaking into the competitive, overcrowded literary world, it will be due in no small part to the encouragement I have received from the wonderful people who frequent this forum.

hey, Rainey, that was just a comment.

I didn’t want to spoil your holiday with my disillusion, I swear.

Hmm…not sure how your disillusion could affect my holiday, but thanks.

which is just fine.

but the poem is beautiful