A woman's gaping wet hole.

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There’s a woman naked on the bed with her wet gaping hole.

She’s waiting for somebody in particular. Somebody more specifically.

She’s sexy and beautiful with her wet gaping moist hole which is a black void much as her very shallow personality.

She’s not looking for no ordinary man. She’s looking for a wealthy high income earner to stuff her full of dollars which she then calls love.

She’s lying there in waiting for somebody to stuff her with greenback love or a visa MasterCard.

She wants to grow old behind a white picket fence with her wet gaping hole desiring greenback love.

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Nice poem. It made me think that man living in his blingy gold house.

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Thanks.

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“The price of love is always just above that what your heart can afford”
nice poem. Very misogynist though.

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Thanks. It was meant to be misogynist. I’ll be writing more poetry as time goes by. I actually like poetry. I have a sort of affinity for it I like to think.

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I cannot describe the woman’s motives because I don’t know her. I think the male motive is to get back into the protective security of the womb, to get back into Eden despite the armed angels guarding the gate.

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When I was a kid and turned old enough to drive a car, like many American kids I just sorta felt like somehow I’d end up with one. Of course not a nice new car, because my parents were super poor and I just had a part time minimum wage job. But somehow some way, I did not get a car.

Then for a long time I just stood around bitching saying things like, “well they said they were gonna…or it’s not fair that____because of…or I shouldn’t have to because someone promised they would…or this isn’t right if I had money or my family had money then I would have a car so I hate those kids who have cars.”

Then one day I grew the fuck up and just got myself a car like a grown ass man.

When I read you complaining about women all being money grubbers, you sound ridiculous. For one, you already fucking know it. Of course a woman isn’t going to be with a man who can’t support himself, let alone one who can’t contribute anything to her well being.

If you think that standing around bitching instead of getting the money you keep talking about is what’s going to eventually get you what you want, then you’re not even reading your own posts.

Go out, fucking rob someone, steal something and pawn it. Sell fake crack, sell catnip as weed to strangers in the hood then take off running. Get a fucking bankroll man and do something with it and then you’ll have to shit you want. No one’s gonna do it for ya, and no one’s stopping you.

For a guy who can’t stand the govt and who wants anarchy, you sure don’t seem to have the nuts to break any of the rules that you might profit from breaking. You have to take risks to get rewards. That’s not some made-up mantra to promote capitalism, that’s the state of nature.

You might think that I’m a clean shaven prick who doesn’t understand your plight, but you’re wrong. I robbed and stole my way out of it and I used my brain every single day. I haven’t had a good night’s sleep in 15 years. So stop pining for some utopia, get with the real world, find a mark and hit it, and start sticking your penis into more women, drinking better beer, and having the time you want to be who you are instead of who you have to be. It could take years man for you to realize, but so, so, so much of your frustration is self imposed. Not all of it, but so much.

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You see what I"m saying? I was like, “not having a car isn’t fair and this isn’t right and someone owes it to me!”. I went on like that for several years before I finally bought myself a car.

Since you already know that women aren’t interested in guys who have no money, just get the fucking money. I don’t know why people think that’s so hard. It’s only hard if you follow all the rules of the plantation. If you’re an anarchist…then not breaking those rules is just weird.

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Your point is not to discover who hides behind so much misogyny but i must concede that one can’t avoid to react to such a bad faith. As for me, i regard the poet as an amoral creature that creates only but virtualities. You can’t judge him morally for being a misogynist in a piece of fiction.
They are only but books and Tyrannus might also prefer to stick it into them. :slight_smile:

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Working on the money part now, but it is very difficult and time consuming.

My goal is to become some kind of engineer someday.

Also, I no longer view myself an anarchist anymore.

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No man. I want you to go out and steal from the rich and then do with it what you want to make yourself happy. Don’t learn a bunch of math so you can be a better slave.

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I quite liked this line in the poem.