About Wine, Among Many Subjects

Please tell me what you think.

[size=150]Sharp glass makes blue sky bleed from red veins.
Amarillo flowers fall from broken spirals
and land on the lakes where they remain,
For several lonely moments before they sink.

A question makes color light like a vision.
The wiring of decisions meld like fresh spices
in the mind of captives and dirty politicians.
The answer is a shadow that kills revelations.

Two strong arms gently sip the same spine,
as lips melt into a pool of well deserved pleasure.
Smiles that are thighs forged from red wine.
Splashes of evolution paint the seams together.

Paintings of videos that make simplicity intricate,
a poison that deludes the most marvelous tourniquet.
Deplorable demons slaughter heathens in nightmares
Winter wakes with eight legs upon a roman fanfare.

The morning sings sublime songs of sunrise.
A summer wish that settles miasmic spirits.
Captivating harmonies that lift my being to its birth.
A kaleidoscope breathes sober in the romance of jazz. [/size]

This is a song I created most of, that I wrote the poem for.
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Really like the music pop. =D> It’s good to hear yung 'uns doing something other than trash metal and expecially good to hear a bit of jazz. Kewel.

I particularly like the changes and the touch of madness; it shows there’s real creativity in the group. Yeah, for real talent!!!

The only thing I think it needs is a masters touch on the editing side.

PS I can’t imagine how you plan to incorporate the lyrics. Even though they seem a bit rich for me as they are, they might work perfectly with the music. Just depends on how you plan to use them.

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