American Captive

that shit is awesome

like attending a fine wake again.

used to dress in a milk mans outfit, I hear, to reflect the sun.

& waaaaaaaaaaaay be yonder.

But boundaries prevail

prevail, another line drawn, at the pace of a snail, slick sand, so rail on.

Some prevalence is a put upon pie.
Not put on, but put upon.

upon an apron serving crusty crumbles, at the edge of what is prevalent, thumb plunk down in it and up with its jam jelly

Hung Adrian heresies is a source of conflict.

(Personally attested beyond boundary)

hungalungadingus, herc efforts.

Meno, as much of a fool as I am for non-sense, I gotta go for now.

Everybody else enjoy the novel as contained within this thread. It is fiction but also crazy personal.

I understand. & please think of me why I wish to change my name to The Invisible.for then no grudges, shortcumings or mavericks can be held

its not a shortcoming, its unique to you and at times refreshing, Mr. I still see you.

Dallas marvericks held to a few buckets.

In some future revised edition the first lines of this novel would read . . .

Truth is, the best liars believe their own lies. The best actors live out their own act.

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Berkley Babes

Didn’t expect much, but as I read on and on and on… I think it is really good.
I am only up to Chap. 5 but it sort of reminds me of David Lynch, ie Lost Highway, Twin Peaks, style wise. Your descriptions of people are minimalistic (or for want of a better word, “contemporary”) yet rich in the way in which an actor plays a character.

I don’t want to rush it with the reading as I fear I may miss something.

Thanks for giving it a shot, really. No rush. Thanks also for letting me know how you experience it, as I’m open to your reaction, fully.

2and the motion

Chapter 6

Hilarious…

Haha, awesome of ya to say so.

Except for

Cut me up…

If it helps, in real life he was fed and rescued. True story.