Wow. I just listened to your piano vid. Fucking A man, I didn’t know you played like that.
The whole improve was well organized with some very nice (and interesting) transitions… or is that something you’ve written? It’s obvious you’ve spent some time at the keys, so fess up. One just doesn’t walk into a room and say… how did you put it…“I’m not a pianist” and then sit down and play a piano like that.
What you mean to say is “I played and practiced piano for [ insert years ] and then stopped. And here is some stuff I remember.”
The second or third one he/she posted was the best one I think. It was the one in 6/4. Repost that one Trixie. The one before the battle of wherever it was, one. The second or third one you posted here.
This has potential. However it gets a little flat a short while in, there should be another melody layer. I only sense a drone drum/metronome guitar chant and one melody layer.
Then about 1.41 it should cool down and get into some moody surreal piece, like hushed drums and like some kind of thoughtful surreal flute thing.