CHESS GAME

[size=150]CHESS GAME[/size]

Over the sixty-four square pieces of obsidian and opal, a war had been wagered.  The two players would be referring to themselves as supreme dieties or great generals, weilding the fate of their army in their hands, but not today.  The game had gone on for some time already.  Only a few power pieces remained on both sides, but the real battle would be decided by the smallest of those pieces.

"Have you ever really studied them John?"

"What's that Tim?"

"The hordlings that trample over each other just to catch a glimpse of their gods or goddess.  You've seen them, but have you ever truly studied them?"

"No, I haven't.  What does this have to do with the chess game?"

"Oh, wouldn't you like to know," Tim speaks devilishly as one of his black knights gallops on its steed across the boards with its bloodthirsty sword, eager to smite down John's holy bishop.  Gracefully, the obsidian knight passes around several opal pawns, dodging their puny spears with its keen tactics. Suddenly the white-robed bishop falls in a single blow to the head.

"I'm assuming you're going to tell me."

"Indeed, but first, make your move," urges Tim.  John quickly orders his other bishop to move in and eliminate the disturbingly keen black knight.  Using such divine powers that would amaze many peasants.  Floating off the ground, the holy bishop levitated to a reasonable height.  It then proceeded to fly across the opal and obsidian battlefield meeting with the knight of darkness whose doom was as swift as the wind.  Caught in a peril of gleaming divine energies that swirled around him, the knight was pulled down into a black hole of eternal void.  He was no more for sure.

"Hmm..good move."

"Thank you," returns John adamantly.

"Now, each celebrity, be it in the music or movie industry, or anywhere for that matter, has guards.  Like our kings and queens, a celebrity must have a knight, a bishop, and a castle to guard them.  However, all celebrities have fans, minions, pawns.  Does it not make you wonder to what end a desperate fan would actually want from their most prized celebrity besides signing everything they own.  To such an extreme, any such fan would be liable to serve a certain celebrity if it were to guarantee something worthwhile.  This liability can extend to serve as a weapon for the celebrity, do you not agree?"

"Are you telling me that celebrities are part of an elaborate chess game of stylized life?"

"To an extent, yes.  When you really look at it all, everything on this planet can be compared to a game of chess.  There is a goal in everything and a strategy of getting to that goal."

“I don’t know which to call you Tim.  A philosopher or a psychopath.”

“Then let me delude your confusion.  Philosopher.”

“You would say that wouldn’t you,” exclaims John.

"Just as I would make a move such as this," Tim comments as he quickly recovers from the blow to his knight by pushing up his rook.  The stalwart tall mobile castle, pushed by several strongmen in the rear, moves like a juggernaut across the battlefield.  Within moments, the sheer momentum literally ran over the dark bishop.  The body pulled below and crushed by stone wheels.  The white glow in the bishop's eyes glimmered brightly in the horrid scream before dying out beneath the daunting mobile fortress.  It suddenly turned to face the solidly devout white king.

“Check."

“You risk much in this game, like those fans.”

“Oh?”

"Yes.  When your focus is someone else, others do not seem important to you.  There are those who would kill to be friends with their ‘gods’ or ‘goddesses’.  It is they who risk much to achieve happiness."

"Jesus Tim," John bursted, and after a brief pause overlooking the board said, "you sincerely are insane."

"Tell that to those fans.  Those who breathe, drink, and eat the merchandise of their fabled superiors.  Just like your succeptability to let my castle get through to put your king in danger.  You did not put enough focus on protecting your king.  And now it shall die for the glory of my king, which it will do nicely."

"I don't think so," counters John as his hand is cast over the battlefield to command his white knight to ride by the castle and set it aflame.  In mere moments, the blazing fire engulfed and incinerated the cumbersome vehicle of gargantuan proportions.  However, all was not in vain as a mere pawn moved in with a four-foot spear to knock the mighty knight off his horse and into the flames.  There were no more power pieces left now.  Just the kings and their lowest minions in a battle of brute force.  White and black battled to reign over the hardened land tortured by war and strife.  When it came down to it, it was the pawn that decided the game.  And when John's king and battle-hardened soldiers cornered the black king, it was over not as was expected.  The checkmate never came.  Tim was too proud to go down like that.  The black king drank the vile poison that was stashed in his coat and fell on the battlefield just as the enemy approached.

"I think you're right Tim.  The fans are the ultimate weapon."


Tim smirked.

-END-

fucking amazing piece of writing, i am really impressed do you have anything else?

Sure, lots…any genre you like especially?

things that tend to have background meanings, occasionally philisophical, things that are new and haven’t really been done, particularly liked the chess theme because it played a key part in a novel i finished reading recently. Basically anything!!

A novel eh? And what novel would that be? Did it have a novel idea to it? :laughing:

I enjoyed this also, but was expecting you to say something like, ‘with every move a pawn makes it gets closer to realising it true potential, when at last it reaches it’s final goal and becomes a powerful entity transformed by the path of experience on the battlefield’

That’s not a bad idea Pax…if I touch up on this story, I might just add in a little correlation to ambition leading the little people to stardom.

By the way…if you all liked this, maybe you’d care to read some of the others that’s been dragged down into the rest of the unread threads. Just scroll down into the Creative Writing forum and find two stories named THE CALLER OF THE TARPAN and LOST CAUSE.

Thanks! As someone who appreciates both chess and good literature.

Getting a compliment from the mods has to be a sign…maybe I should rewrite it better with more metaphorical connotations?

can’t remember what the novel was called, but it was a trashy chick novel… although dispite that it did actually have some interesting philisophical undercurrents, it was kind of pretending to be a trashy novel, i will look it up for you!!! It had similar symbology

Sagesound wrote:

Did you realize that if his Knight took your Bishop it would be impossible for your other Bishop to take his Knight back for that would mean that both your Bishops can occupy the same square – white Bishops can only play white squares, and dark Bishops can only play dark squares.

LoL, do you go around picking holes in movie plots also??? :evilfun:

I have to admit, I wrote that story pretty hastily. Thanks for pointing this out…now I can correct it in my rewrite… gee…now don’t I look like a keen chess player? lol!

sagesound
i like your piece. you have a knack for physical descriptions indeed. in terms of content…also good. personally, i feel like famous people are the ultimate pawns. who sacrifices their freedom like that? so ignorantly? who volunteers their life to become a commodity?
i blame corporations. i’m not anti-capitalist, i just think our economic system is overly prioritized. i have this feeling that our political and economic systems should be separate and that the political should reign over the economic. i think this order is reversed today (in the usa…and other places).
but thats just my inclination. thanks for sharing.

Pax Vitae wrote:

Invariably :sunglasses:

Thanks, I don’t know why it’s this one story of mine that everyone likes…maybe chess is something everyone on this forum has something in common?? :laughing:

It’s not suprising…there are plenty of no-talent ass-clowns who have agreed to sell their souls to the whims of corporations just to feel “above everyone.” And yet, are they really above? Just because I know the name Ashley Simpson and what she looks like, that doesn’t mean she’s above me. Why? Not because she’s living the high life on easy street, but because she can’t sing, and I’m only being nice when I say that.

Oh, I agree completely. I may not be anti-capitalists, but I am against corporate expansion and growth. In fact, I strongly believe the best economy is based on sole proprietorships. A limited capitalist economy where no corporate partnerships may exist creates more businesses which then creates more competition and growth. This is my answer to poverty.

No, thank you for sharing! In enjoyed reading your comments! :slight_smile:

i don’t think so there was a lot of interest in your soul one, with the homeless person… although perhaps there is a philosophy mindset behind both those too not found in the others, they are certainly the easiest to read…
it’s a good story as are the others, i’m getting around to posting/reading them all!!
you should post the one you emailed me, i really enjoyed that

That story is quite long…I might have to post it in several chapters…if I ever get around to fixing it up.

I am happy to announce that my fictionpress.com account is up and running and the first story entry is a slight rewrite of CHESS GAME.

fictionpress.com/~sagesound

Enjoy!