Could you correct and make this paragraph more direct?

No study is a random process. Yet, many teachers claim that it is not possible to plan the study on things because everything tends to change. They are the teachers, who never give a try to make a distinction between things and their properties. Have you ever tried to distinguish the master knowledge which is used to plan your studies? There is no need to spend money and time in schools and colleges in order to learn to study things, if you can distinguish and use the master knowledge with which everything can be studied. Do you want to spend money in the name of learning to study or want to save time and money? It is high time for you to make a decision! Can’t you plan your studies? Do you need anyone else to guide your studies? It is the properties of things which guides your study of things. You can study nothing if you don’t have any capacity to distinguish the properties of things. You get no special skill to study things by paying your guide. [analytical.wikia.com]

Learning is not a random process. Yet, many teachers claim that it is not possible to have a simple coherent method to start learning and to understand the objective world, because of it’s inherent nature to change. These teachers never bother to make a distinction between an object and it’s inherent properties. Have you ever tried to find out a truly simple way to understand the objective world ? There is no need to spend money and time in schools and colleges in order to learn to study things, if you can distinguish and use a method, in which everything can be looked at and studied very simply. Do you want to spend money, in the name of learning, to study, or do you want to understand a simple method to save time and money ? It is high time for you to make a decision! Can you formulate a simple method, to be able to look at any object and understand it’s inherent qualities? Do you need someone else to teach you how to look at and understand the world you see all around you ? There is a simple method to learn to understand the properties of things which helps you to understand the nature of the world. You can’t study anything if you don’t have a method to distinguish the properties of any given object. You get no special insight by paying a teacher by blindly memorizing knowledge and books unless you begin by knowing HOW to look at something, in a simple, and clearly defined way.

Many teachers who are unwilling or unable to distinguish between objects and their properties, will tell you that study can not be a planned process. They will tell you the thirst for knowledge and the understanding of the actual process to gain such knowledge is not enough to correctly learn and study.
With the right understanding, skills and the capacity to use master knowledge with which everything can be studied, you can forgo spending years of your life and hundreds of thousands of dollars on a contemporary education and still end up more educated than if you had.
Do you need to be guided on what to study, how to study it and when to study it? Do you need to pay someone to tell you these things?
If you have the capacity to distinguish the actual properties of things, all you really need to continue your education is the desire and drive, not the teachers, the buildings or the returned checks to prove you were there.

How can you look at nature in a defined way? There is no model in nature‘s creations. No two things are the same: no two leaves on a tree, no two meteorological patterns, no two people. Every thing is unparallel, unprecedented, unrepeatable.

However, those properties of things that can be scientifically repeated measured and investigated can be categorized according to certain established predictable behavioral patterns. Surely you can analyze in a laboratory, but certain aspects of some phenomena cannot be captured no matter what the method.

I have a hard time seeing what it is that you are trying to say, so any correction that I would make would be a bit uncertain.

A paragraph should be able to be summarized in merely 2 abstract sentences (often the first and last sentences in a paragraph). I would suggest that you do that first, then write your more detailed explanation into a paragraph around those two sentences.

From what I can see of what you wrote, it seems to me that you really have more than a single paragraph.

MORE DIRECT–

“Study is a process of strict order. Many teachers think otherwise, claiming it impossible to plan the study in the face of ongoing change. These very teachers never aim any effort at the true properties of a thing. Have you ever tried to distinguish the master knowledge before it is put to use in study? There is no need to spend money on advanced education in order to be someone who studies, when it’s just as easy to master the higher forms of study. Do you want to spend time and money on learning, when curiousity is already free and rewarding? Can’t you follow your curious nature? Do you actually need a guide for this? Instead, let the properites of things guide your study. Study must come from an ability to make distinctions among the things of your interest. Make your move. Make it now. Plan it all out, then study.”