This just has one word written all over it: cute. I feel like your little poem, is an adorable little kid who’s cheeks I just want to squeeze through the pages – Hmm, yes, that’s how I feel.
Embracetrees are you the Uber-Cute Nietzsche foretold of in his Zarathustra?
This is really cute…if you had any intention too you could always make historical references…as you go along the poem…in chronological order…but perhaps that wasn’t your intention…as it stands it is a playful little poem about