FEEDBACK -- 24-27March 2007

out-of-state
café folk-singer

gives his voice a rest
to let his guitar

do the talking
for a spell

playing to a houseful
of empty tipcups


would my heartfelt applause

and the few pennies
my pockets can cough up

be music enough to his ears
as incentive

for him to consider
a return engagement

worthwhile

i’m an empty teacup right now. nice observation

Thanx Alex – b/c of my high regard for your talent as a poet/writer, I appreciate “feedback” from you whether or not it’s positive. I appreciate feedback from anyone, for that matter but esp’ly from those whose talent is a high caliber.

–lhw