Fluid waters of ice

That just sounds good. When does a phrase sound good, when it does not mean anything? Certain posters on this board have expert knowledge of this. Ask them. I would not know. But answer me here! It is pertinent.

I think CW is a better forum for this.

has to do with rhythm.

Fluid waters of ice seep, drop after drop,
Through last year’s snow. Does it know…