# Haiku Tag

**URL:** https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/t/haiku-tag/27735
**Category:** Creative Writing
**Created:** [April 14, 2010, 5:05am UTC](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/t/haiku-tag/27735 "2010-04-14T05:05:30Z")
**Posts on this page:** 20
**Page:** 4

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### Author: ![PavlovianModel146](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/user_avatar/www.ilovephilosophy.com/pavlovianmodel146/32/544_2.png) [@PavlovianModel146](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/u/PavlovianModel146)
#### Post date: [April 16, 2010, 1:21am UTC](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/t/haiku-tag/27735/61 "2010-04-16T01:21:18Z")

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Out attachment’s grasp,  
Do not get caught in that clasp;  
For breath you will gasp.

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### Author: ![Che](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/letter_avatar_proxy/v4/letter/c/d78d45/32.png) [@Che](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/u/Che)
#### Post date: [April 16, 2010, 2:21am UTC](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/t/haiku-tag/27735/62 "2010-04-16T02:21:52Z")

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For breath you will gasp  
lips, teeth, and tongue exploring  
flesh trembles with joy.

This is fun. xD

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### Author: ![Wonderer](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/user_avatar/www.ilovephilosophy.com/wonderer/32/637_2.png) [@Wonderer](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/u/Wonderer)
#### Post date: [April 16, 2010, 2:50am UTC](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/t/haiku-tag/27735/63 "2010-04-16T02:50:20Z")

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flesh trembles with joy,  
gruesome violence ensues;  
bloody sacrifice

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### Author: ![Oughtist](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/letter_avatar_proxy/v4/letter/o/e9c0ed/32.png) [@Oughtist](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/u/Oughtist)
#### Post date: [April 16, 2010, 3:31am UTC](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/t/haiku-tag/27735/64 "2010-04-16T03:31:51Z")

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bloody sacrifice  
wastes not a drop of sweat on  
leisurly retreats

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### Author: ![krossie](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/user_avatar/www.ilovephilosophy.com/krossie/32/363_2.png) [@krossie](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/u/krossie)
#### Post date: [April 16, 2010, 2:24pm UTC](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/t/haiku-tag/27735/65 "2010-04-16T14:24:41Z")

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leisurly retreats  
dropping poppies and seedz  
with wide mouth to eat

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### Author: ![Che](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/letter_avatar_proxy/v4/letter/c/d78d45/32.png) [@Che](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/u/Che)
#### Post date: [April 16, 2010, 2:40pm UTC](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/t/haiku-tag/27735/66 "2010-04-16T14:40:50Z")

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With wide mouth to eat  
no nutrition to receive  
empty, wide mouth cries.

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### Author: ![anon](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/user_avatar/www.ilovephilosophy.com/anon/32/611_2.png) [@anon](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/u/anon)
#### Post date: [April 16, 2010, 2:51pm UTC](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/t/haiku-tag/27735/67 "2010-04-16T14:51:28Z")

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> [@Che](#):
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> With wide mouth to eat  
> no nutrition to receive  
> empty, wide mouth cries.

Empty, wide mouth cries.  
Occasionally, loud mouths  
Listen.

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### Author: ![Oughtist](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/letter_avatar_proxy/v4/letter/o/e9c0ed/32.png) [@Oughtist](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/u/Oughtist)
#### Post date: [April 16, 2010, 2:59pm UTC](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/t/haiku-tag/27735/68 "2010-04-16T14:59:51Z")

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Listen {3…4…5  
6…7…8…9…10…11…12}  
silent syllables

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### Author: ![anon](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/user_avatar/www.ilovephilosophy.com/anon/32/611_2.png) [@anon](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/u/anon)
#### Post date: [April 16, 2010, 3:07pm UTC](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/t/haiku-tag/27735/69 "2010-04-16T15:07:34Z")

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> [@Oughtist](#):
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> Listen {3…4…5  
> 6…7…8…9…10…11…12}  
> silent syllables

Silent syllables:  
Another oxymoron  
For Oughtist’s pleasure. 🙂

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### Author: ![Oughtist](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/letter_avatar_proxy/v4/letter/o/e9c0ed/32.png) [@Oughtist](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/u/Oughtist)
#### Post date: [April 16, 2010, 9:31pm UTC](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/t/haiku-tag/27735/70 "2010-04-16T21:31:58Z")

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for Oughtist’s pleasure  
contradictions synthesized  
the Canist’s distress

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### Author: ![anon](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/user_avatar/www.ilovephilosophy.com/anon/32/611_2.png) [@anon](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/u/anon)
#### Post date: [April 16, 2010, 10:23pm UTC](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/t/haiku-tag/27735/71 "2010-04-16T22:23:21Z")

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> [@Oughtist](#):
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> for Oughtist’s pleasure  
> contradictions synthesized  
> the Canist’s distress

The Canist’s distress -  
An unworthy sacrifice?  
Not sure what it means.

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### Author: ![PavlovianModel146](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/user_avatar/www.ilovephilosophy.com/pavlovianmodel146/32/544_2.png) [@PavlovianModel146](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/u/PavlovianModel146)
#### Post date: [April 17, 2010, 2:50am UTC](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/t/haiku-tag/27735/72 "2010-04-17T02:50:29Z")

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Not sure what it means,  
But does that really matter;  
It’s there anyway.

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### Author: ![Che](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/letter_avatar_proxy/v4/letter/c/d78d45/32.png) [@Che](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/u/Che)
#### Post date: [April 17, 2010, 4:07pm UTC](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/t/haiku-tag/27735/73 "2010-04-17T16:07:04Z")

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It’s there anyway  
unable to remove it -  
your character scarred.

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### Author: ![Arcturus\_Descending](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/user_avatar/www.ilovephilosophy.com/arcturus_descending/32/700_2.png) [@Arcturus\_Descending](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/u/Arcturus_Descending)
#### Post date: [April 17, 2010, 5:31pm UTC](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/t/haiku-tag/27735/74 "2010-04-17T17:31:05Z")

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> [@Che](#):
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> It’s there anyway  
> unable to remove it -  
> your character scarred.

your character scarred  
Phantom of the Opera  
though true grace beneath!!!

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### Author: ![Oughtist](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/letter_avatar_proxy/v4/letter/o/e9c0ed/32.png) [@Oughtist](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/u/Oughtist)
#### Post date: [April 17, 2010, 6:08pm UTC](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/t/haiku-tag/27735/75 "2010-04-17T18:08:38Z")

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{ ![8-[](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/uploads/default/original/2X/c/c2c6b2db4f768c7bf93cea265ed4e2c63ae01880.gif "Anxious") Yikes, didn’t mean to point my Can at you, Anon!!}

Though true grace beneath  
covers the underbelly  
mania appears

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### Author: ![anon](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/user_avatar/www.ilovephilosophy.com/anon/32/611_2.png) [@anon](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/u/anon)
#### Post date: [April 17, 2010, 6:13pm UTC](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/t/haiku-tag/27735/76 "2010-04-17T18:13:24Z")

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> [@Oughtist](#):
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> { ![8-[](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/uploads/default/original/2X/c/c2c6b2db4f768c7bf93cea265ed4e2c63ae01880.gif "Anxious") Yikes, didn’t mean to point my Can at you, Anon!!}

Is that what it meant? ![#-o](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/uploads/default/original/2X/7/78536cf08b5cbccb06a10e44ddb8da50bfc1554d.gif "d'oh!")

> [@](#):
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> Though true grace beneath  
> covers the underbelly  
> mania appears

Mania appears,  
Then mania disappears -  
A healthy hearbeat

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### Author: ![Arcturus\_Descending](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/user_avatar/www.ilovephilosophy.com/arcturus_descending/32/700_2.png) [@Arcturus\_Descending](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/u/Arcturus_Descending)
#### Post date: [April 17, 2010, 6:25pm UTC](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/t/haiku-tag/27735/77 "2010-04-17T18:25:08Z")

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> [@](#):
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> Anon wrote:
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> Mania appears,  
> Then mania disappears -  
> A healthy hearbeat

A healthy heartbeat  
micro drums echo macro  
universe at play

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### Author: ![anon](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/user_avatar/www.ilovephilosophy.com/anon/32/611_2.png) [@anon](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/u/anon)
#### Post date: [April 17, 2010, 6:41pm UTC](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/t/haiku-tag/27735/78 "2010-04-17T18:41:22Z")

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> [@arcturus rising](#):
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> A healthy heartbeat  
> micro drums echo macro  
> universe at play

Universe at play  
Punctual exclamations  
Dancing bananas!!!

![:banana-dance:](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/uploads/default/original/2X/2/29318572f82025a8ad4574bf3f2617ae465ef82a.gif "Dance")

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### Author: ![Oughtist](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/letter_avatar_proxy/v4/letter/o/e9c0ed/32.png) [@Oughtist](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/u/Oughtist)
#### Post date: [April 17, 2010, 6:42pm UTC](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/t/haiku-tag/27735/79 "2010-04-17T18:42:41Z")

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universe at play  
cosmos gains agility  
beings work hardly

crap… splivage

dancing bananas  
potassium enriched legs  
fruitful exercise

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### Author: ![Arcturus\_Descending](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/user_avatar/www.ilovephilosophy.com/arcturus_descending/32/700_2.png) [@Arcturus\_Descending](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/u/Arcturus_Descending)
#### Post date: [April 17, 2010, 6:46pm UTC](https://www.ilovephilosophy.com/t/haiku-tag/27735/80 "2010-04-17T18:46:57Z")

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> [@](#):
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> anon wrote:
> 
> Universe at play  
> Punctual exclamations  
> Dancing bananas!!!

Dancing bananas!!!  
Dragon’s neurons firing…  
She skims the waves…weeeee!!!

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