sacred blue water
constant ever in presence
is never the same
River wide
Drifting leaves shimmer
dappled light
3-5-3
fishing bad
ink trail leads the way
squid sandwich
-Imp
A biscuit eaten
Savage chocolate drowns kids
Emulsified fat
5-7-5
enormous
spandex clinging tight
puppy chow
3 5 3 HIKE!
-Imp
softly weeping eyes
betray brave outward display,
asks where mommy is
Forging industry
a broken heart beats inside
dying brutally
haikus are much fun
unfortunatley they’re
difficult to write
(occasionally)
“We’re looking down on Wayne’s base-
ment only that’s not
Wayne’s basement… isn’t that weird?”
listen all night long
only thing I have to give
he is my brother
Superb… invokes feeling as well as a whole imagine of story.
That’s a really good one… it invokes a lot of imagery.
Excellent… invokes intended image and feeling everyone can relate to.
Insightful of the writer?..
A biscuit eaten
Delicious dark chocolate
Kids lick their fingers
Taken together I have to agree with you heh…
Meditative…
Superb…
Invokes feeling and thinking and philosophy…
Enjoyed all your haiku’s…thanks.
-cp
Interpret
a picture of words
take your time
porcelain
a warm smile dripping
cold plastic
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without you
these supple feelings
fleet fireflies
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struggling
inner opposites
collision!
soft brown eyes
convey hello, and
more than this
light it is, really,
when she understands the end,
the cross she must bear
big biscuit
uneeda biscuit
eat biscuit
I have a bullet
With our memories in it.
I will shoot to kill.
If you cannot find
A baseball that has been signed
It is on Ebay.
Reese’s for breakfast?
Now that is just plain whacky.
WHOAH! (I take a bite.)
excellent!
wonderful!
plenty of Cheetos,
Fritos, Pringles, and Ruffles
better get more beer