Here, There, Everywhere

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Number 44
A tentative pseudonym
Tucked down by the end of the earth
With a view of mountains
The door is a perfect 10 in three parts
Horizontally leveled triangle
Where the spirit of Earp lives

My age, oh, my age
Seen? Told? Past and present
On the “Boulevard of Broken Dreams”
Nineteen is so difficult
Because there is nothing in the middle

In the City of Angels
“Dani California” R.I.P.
But Earp lives on
Next to Route 66
By the town square
Thirty years is more beautiful

Someday
Somewhere
Another time
The people will rejoice
At the death of a devil
And the birth of a man
With faith
With heart
With love
A light
.

-Thirst

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Wow. thirst, how do you manage to keep topping yourself? This is really good - possibly your best.

lhw - AKA: The Straight-faced Clown AKA: M.C. Tape-Hiss

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Hi LHW,

You are very kind.
Thanks friend.

See ya in the forums.

-Thirst

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After re-reading this poem, the above are, to me, the strongest lines of the entire poem. I also love the tie-in to rock song titles. You are a pro.

lhw - AKA: The Straight-faced Clown AKA: M.C. Tape-Hiss