this is a song i have been working on, but i thought i’d post it here just to get some feedback.
Irrational
Hold my head underwater
then watch me drown
Put the blade to my wrist
and stain the ground
I’m alive, I’m a man
Let me live, make me die
Watch me ache, watch me bleed
wipe these tears from my eyes
I’ve fallen from reality
a victim of your lies
Reflections of my photograph
are no more real than I
Break the mirror. Burn the print
So you can never tell
what is real and what is fake
it’s all irrational
i know it seems a bit grim but its a bit metaphoric, feel free to interpret it as you wish. I do want to credit the line “Reflections of my photograph are no more real than i” to an idea brought up in a book by Philip K Dick called VALIS.
-Brian