Life in a verse

Life:

You placed me, here in this superiour verse
As a note, amongs many with a thirst
My existence, and life shall contribute
To the masterpiece of life
Equally important to the verses
Harmonious are all life, in its forms
To the masterpiece of life.

(mind you im not english speaker natively, written directly in english first)

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Nice, but needs expanding on/a bit of reworking, so as to have more impact - look forward to reading more of your works :slight_smile: