Liquid Existence

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she screams
breaking the silence
like shattered glass
and it falls upon her feet
she smiles at the scarlet beads
because she knows that to bleed is to be alive

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(i need feedback)

Do you make yourself bleed or do you allow others to cut you?

I like the imagery.

blushes im glad you like the imagery, thats what i was going for :wink: