Not Really a Poem; Don't Read.

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alex is a sometimes friend
with sometimes smiles

alex is a sometimes bud
who walks for miles
for his sometimes friends

alex is a sometimes son
to a guy with a sometimes love

alex is a sometimes son
to a lady with a new love
deserving of her, she soaks him up

alex is a sometimes brother
to a genius, legendary king
and an unborn Addie

alex is depressed sometimes
and he thinks it be cause
of the way he looks

alex is a sometimes lover
a virgin, indifferent to women
his own age

but most of all
alex is a sometimes person
because he is cursed with mediocrity

if we all don’t take cover
we’ll all fall in love again.

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This was a pretty good poem until the last two line stanza. My only suggestion to improve this non-poem poem --not that it really needs improving-- would be to consider dropping the last stanza. Overall, this is a minor trivial flaw that doesn’t adversely handicap this (non-)poem.

lhw: AKA --the Straight-faced Clown AKA: M.C. Tape-Hiss

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I like it just the way that it is sometimes.

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thank you all fellow parishioners for your comments

if i remember correctly i was drunk when i wrote this

-OKComp