Opening of Encierro story

Originally founded as a camp around 75 B.C. by Gnaeus Pompeius Magnus and developed over the following centuries to become a Roman town, Pamplona now appears as a medieval city with only murmurs to suggest that it is a hybrid of what were once three distinct townships. It is also hard to detect any trace of Roman architecture, though a published guide tells us that Abd ar-Rahman III destroyed the city in 924, reducing it for some decades to little more than the sort of minor agricultural settlement found all over Europe at that time. The territory surrounding the capital is, like much of Spain, dry and dead, but areas of the city are lush and green. In short, it is a place with a history of conflict.

Pamplona is also host to the most famous of all encierro, the running of the bulls, which can be seen all over Spain during the fiesta season.  In Pamplona it is part of the Fiesta de San Fermín, San Fermín being a Saint who was martyred by being dragged by a bull through the streets of Pamplona.  As I walked the streets in the days prior to the event areas of the city were being barricaded and thus a route was formed.  The barricades generally consisted of railings with gaps between them that are large enough for competidores to join or leave the race but narrow enough to block a charging bull.  I garnered this via a conversation in broken Spanish with a man with pure white whiskers, impressively olive skin and a manner which made me suspect that he was drunk.  When he left the bar to use the excusado I walked out, I needed air and I didn’t want him to regale me with tales of heroism and humiliation regarding past encierros.  

I tried to smoke a cigarette as I walked along the stretch that had been enclosed for the race.  Even though it was evening it was too hot out of the shadows so I stubbed the cigarette on the cobbles.  It slipped into the crack between two stones and I couldn’t just leave it there smoking so I tried to fish it out, burning the end of my index finger in the process.  I cursed, sucking my finger ferociously.  It bore little mark, though I knew that it would blister within hours.  I pressed hard on the spot where a blister would form despite knowing that this would hinder my body’s own healing technique.  This self-flagellation was designed to temporarily numb the sore spot in the hope that by the time the nerves were back to normal my attention would be distracted and I would no longer feel the pain.  I winced and the tendon in my elbow twitched but I was soon rewarded with a transformation of the pain to a series of tiny pin pricks, a dotted line, la línea punteada.  

There is a saying popular among people from the south East of England when on holiday in Spain.  To the foreigner it appears that what is being said is “idz doo fakkin o’h”.  It is.  Even at night when I sleep, or at least lie in the shadows trying not to think.  I have to soak towels in the sink and drape them over myself just to be able to keep still for long enough to get some rest.  I keep a set of ice-cube trays permanently stocked with frozen ingots that I munch on.  

The gathered crowd twitched in unison as they heard the crack of the firework. The starting area became a throng, the runners taking up positions and looking over their shoulders, the no-competidores scrambling for exits, dragging themselves over and through barriers or being pulled up to first floor balconies. Their terror and frantic movements acted as a prelude to the race itself, which began almost immediately. At least 14 people have died due to participating in this custom in the last century, the most recent being in 1995 when an American man was gored to death, which perhaps explains the presence of several dozen Policemen and Civil Protection Agents spread along the course. Almost immediately one man, dressed in the traditional all white, was slow to get off the mark and one bull crashed into him with its flank, tossing him against the barricades. Another man was pierced in the buttock, he yelped and clutched at himself as his white trousers turned scarlet to match his neckerchief.

The first 4 of the sirs thundered on, away down the course past where I could see. A few runners who’d been pushed aside by the crowd of runners or the bulls took up positions near the 2 bulls that had lagged, possibly aware that death awaited them at the end of the run. The man with the blood now leaking down the back of his leg dragged himself up to his feet and tried to jog down the road. He soon collapsed and was nervously rescued by two CPAs who kept glancing down the street. One of the bulls approached a man who’d dropped down from a balcony to begin the run and bucked its head. The beast thrust forward and pinned the man against the wall, its horns slashing through his shirt and into the stone. It backed off then charged a group of onlookers behind a barricade, smashing against the wood. The crowd backed off then pressed forward again, jeering at the animal.

=D> I really like this, SIATD. (I’m assuming you wrote it?)

I particularly like the way you set the scene by placing the town and event in its historical context. It adds layers that makes (just another) tourist attraction, interesting.

I also enjoyed the balance between the action-packed drama and the small, personal dramas (cigarette burn and heat exhaustion). In this sort of narrative, the little details are just as important as the big dramas. We just might have another Hemingway on our hands?

Looking forward to the next part.

Thanks, Km, and yes, I did write this. I know that Hemingway wrote a story set in Pamplona but I’ve never read it so I don’t know if I’m completely ripping him off.

On reflection, having not read this piece for months and having posted it last night in a moment of drunken inspiration, it’s actually pretty good. I’m tempted to tell you what the rest of the story (it isn’t finished yet) is about, but that’d ruin it I think.

I’ll post some more soon. :slight_smile:

Crisp clear description and story telling: strong detached observation.

I enjoyed it. Well written.

Splendid!

Next section:

A few other tales emerged over the course of the day. A Norwegian man had his knee ripped open by a rampaging bull, the whiskered man told me. Another man had been knocked down by one beast, which then crashed into one of the barricades. The man had grabbed a piece of the broken wood and threw it at the beast, striking it on the rump. The crowd booed loudly, casting a shower of items at the man. One person threw a piece of wood that struck the man on the head and felled him. As the paramedics rushed in another round of booing rang out across the street. I sipped my cerveza and tried nobly to smoke a cigarette. The beer was already losing its cool, and the smoke stuck in my drying mouth.
“A bunch of people, not only racing the bulls but also racing each other. Individuals, competing collectively, a moving column of separate fleshes, la línea punteada. More than that, a tense dotted line. The competition was not to beat the bulls, but to look the danger of death in the face, touch its horn and get away to tell the tale.”
“It’s too hot to think about any of that.” I didn’t want to insult the woman, she seemed pleasant enough, a journalist writing a travel column for a Sunday supplement. I had no real interest in what she was saying, only in finding a way to get cold enough to smoke.
“Next year I’m going to Moscow. You can smoke all day in Moscow, and you have to drink just to stay alive. You know that they drink so much de-icer and anti-rust fluids in Russia that over three thousand people die there every month from poisoning themselves?” She looked impressed.
“My flat has proper air conditioning, and it’s all paid for by the newspaper. You could cool down there if you like.” The sweat in my eyes made it hard for me to see whether or not she was being seductive.

I almost fainted when we reached the top of the two flights of stairs that led to her room.  The lift was screwed, apparently.  I dragged myself through the door and onto a chair.  She fiddled with a box on the wall and a quiet hum started somewhere.  

“There, should only be a couple of minutes, you’ll see the difference.”
“Do you have any ice?”
“Sure, what do you want to drink?”
“Just ice.” She went over to the bar and shovelled a pile of ice cubes into a glass, and made herself something, I didn’t see what. I swallowed the first cube whole, and crunched up two more inside my mouth. The air conditioning was starting to cool the room, so I sat for a minute sucking on an ice cube and listening to her talk about when she’d visited Indonesia and wrote a four page spread about it.
“So you visit foreign places for brief periods and then present safe, familiar versions of them for your readers?”
“What’s your problem?”
“Nothing, could I have that drink now?”
“Sure.” She went over to the bar and without asking me what I wanted mixed me a whiskey and soda. I sipped it. She’d messed up the proportions but I thanked her anyway.
“People like reading about foreign countries. It’s escapism. It’s also good for them to find out about other places, to know that life and people are different all over the world.”
“It’s a pathetic substitute for not being able to change their own lives.” She didn’t like that. She drank the rest of her glass of whatever, and poured herself another.
“Who do you think you are? I do my job just like anyone else.” I shrugged and lit a blissful cigarette. “You could ask me if it’s alright to smoke, you know.”
“Can I smoke?” I asked, exhaling in her direction. She glared by way of a response.

I left shortly afterwards, sufficiently cooled at least for the walk back to my room. Fireworks boomed overhead and the streets were full of different languages. During the festival season the population swells by up to ten times, making Pamplona the most cosmopolitan spot in Europe for a couple of weeks a year.
“Hey fella, do you know the way to the Hooza Nown hotel?” An American man interrupted my walk.
“I’m not sure. I’m staying there myself, but I don’t really know where I’m going.” This was a lie, I knew exactly where I was going and it wasn’t the Husa Noain. I got away from the man as soon as possible. I wasn’t looking for company, just a bed and a shadow. I passed the hospital and knew that I was close. As I turned up the Avenida de Pío XII I noticed a handful of young people talking in British accents. They seemed downhearted, so I slowed my walk and listened to their conversation.
“I mean, we missed out on the Guggenheim so we could watch some cows run around some idiots.” The group singled out one of their number and blamed her for the apparently boring time that they’d had, and even threatened to take her plane ticket and leave her in Spain. I hastened down the street. I didn’t want to hear anymore.

My room was clean, grimly so. One of the ridiculous things about holidays is that, unlike at home, the room isn’t private. I can’t just lie there naked, idly scratching and thinking about swearing, without some employee coming in to make sure that I haven’t torched the place. Of course, I could explicitly ask them to stop the maid service to my room but then they’d suspect that something was up and check the room when I was out, which is even worse. I thought about turning on the TV but I couldn’t find the remote. It had been tidied. I tore the sheets off the bed and lay down. Within seconds the pillow became too hot, so I flipped it over. I tried to last five minutes but I buckled after two. I went into the small bathroom and turned the shower on. I dragged myself back to the bed and lay there sodden. Too tired to stay awake, too hot to properly sleep, I rested until morning.