REGRETS, DAD

I’m sorry, more I did not care.
I had the chance while you were here.
It’s just that I was unaware.
I never saw you shed a tear.

I did not know you had been hurt.
You always seemed all right to me.
But when you said, “I feel like dirt.”
I sensed something I could not see.

Too late I learned you felt no good.
I cursed the ones who told you so.
They stopped your being what you could
And thus gave you nowhere to go.

That left a hole for you inside,
A wound for life to feel alone
Because someone could not abide
A sin for which you should atone.

Despite your wound you handled well
All obligations that you bore.
You cared for me, that I could tell.
I now know why there was not more.

Had you told me what I know now
I could have tried to make amends.
To you I would have made a bow.
We would have been much more than friends.

I washed you, dressed you, did your shave.
When we went out I helped you walk.
I set you in the tub to bathe.
But through it all we did not talk.

I’m sad you thought I seemed so cold,
That I told you by being gruff
Your effort even to grow old
I felt was never good enough.

If I could do it all again
I’d hug you at least twice a day.
I would try more to ease your pain.
“I love you”, is the least I’d say.

My memory of that last night
Is comfort for which I am glad.
So many times to aid your ‘flight’
I said, “You did a great job Dad.”

Beautiful! Once my dad was taking a flight South. In the airport I hugged him because my mind was full of the possibility of finalities. Even if his was, he could not show it. My embrace was met with no response. His age considered such to be weakness or effeminency. Grit your teeth and bear it in all circumstances. How can I undo in a second’s parting the indoctrinations of a lifetime? I hugged him anyway!

DEB - another good poem. The quoted penultimate quatrian is the strongest stanza of the entire poem

lhw - AKA: The Straight-faced Clown AKA: M.C. Tape-Hiss

Thanks for the personal touch Ierrellus. faust and I had quite a few conversations in my ‘philo’ thread. The ones in which we talked about personal ‘stuff’ are the most memorable. This is my most personal poem but at the same time the theme is universal at least in the “western world”.

Thank you too lhw. I must say though that I an having difficulty figuring you out. The comments you have made to me sound generations apart from a lot of your writing. You are an enigma