hello again,
im not sure whether this is permitted here, but i’d like to recieve some feedback from intelligent people who i suppose are well versed in the arts.
i say this because my video is particualrly horrid.
Be kind.
youtube.com/watch?v=JHkRAPQCSpc&search=boyajian
tell me what you think.
and i the image blacks out im sorry (and it might not make sense)
is it opening ok
yes
I appreciate your effort but I have some issues with the content. I don’t see an established relationship to any of the settings used, could you perhaps convey what relation the gentleman has with the piano, the woods, or the book. Most importantly, what is the signifigance of the knife, it was unclear to me.
I was expecting some memorial of past events but I couldn’t tell how it related to prior events. It seemed more like you were playing hide and seek with the knife. I think what it lacks is clarity.
Thank you for sharing this.
dear crook
thanks for the comment.
for some reason it blacks out and the ending just wont load.
if you want i could email you the final product *that seems to work
it all ties up in the end.
the man with the jacket gets kills himself by the piano.
the man with the yellow shirt turns out to tbe the man with tha jacket
he was a schizephrenic
it sorta ties in…
and to be completly honest…
for my first video i was just sorta…tooling around with settings
thanks again for the input
Ah, sorry, appears I spoke too soon, forgive me. I would like to see the end if you have the time to E-Mail. I also forgot to mention I enjoyed the music, and that it sounds strangely familiar, may I ask what it is?
Hi,
That is one of my favorite songs, but I was wondering who the guitarist is? Also, to me, art should give you feeling or emotion of some kind, and because of the knife, I was on the edge the whole time thinking there would be a murder or suicide. He falls on the hill which leads you to believe he did himself in, but then the book… what could the book mean and what did the key open? I am a pianist so, of course was all over that… I give it an 8 1/2.
Your lighting was perfect; it flowed well and I was nervous —> i.e. emotion.
Good job.
p.s. I am quite fond of Pinot Grigio for our reception.
mason williams- Classical Gas