The Beautiful Ones

[size=167]The Beautiful Ones[/size]

[size=142][i]Cellulite scenes and surgical screams
and lo-sugar/lo-calorie/fake-choccy-icecreams.
Green-tea gels and Gin-Seng scrubs
and loofa-shed skin-cells clogging camomile tubs.

These giraffe-Women stagger hips crooked in silk
their sly trade-mark titties dried arid of milk
with six-packed child-men all pampered and puffed
preening and pouting and clutching crotch stuffed

With old socks.

Ambergris stink and cuttlefish ink
and boiled-up rose-petals in pus-powder-pink
stapled-back lobes and fashionable nose
flashbulb-pop lightning strikes just the right pose.

Clustered in limelight - bitch, bluster and fight
in poly-chrome latex high-thighed and tight
a face rigid with botox, stiff silicon lipped
Sliver-sliced sushi down swan-neck is slipped

Pending regurgitation.

More new-age grub at some chic fitness-club
with a heated stone circular, rune-rhythmic rub.
A shaved-sore sheen, or a slow waxy flow…?
A slash/burn exfoliate, or electric green-glow…?

Click-clatter heeled feet slip-slide over cobbles
push-shove pillow-fighting love-triangle squabbles
Drunk sad and screwed-up bright futures gone grey
Papparazzi crowd car-doors, snap upskirts and pray

for no panties.[/i][/size]

Great! =D>

You rock man. Seriously, woa! :slight_smile:

Great imagery. I noticed just a teensy bit of free verse. :smiley: Keep going. You’ll like it. :wink:

Well, rendered poem, Tab! And you did mingle a freer verse with the poetic…something I try to do… but with less success than this example.

Epic Phrase! Comical, accruate description of many women I know, and of many small men that dwell beneath them.

Sharp comment as ever on our vain hedonistic society…that wants to suck off its own ego…till the mirror speaks their name. Sickening: moral lepers!

=D>

Aye, very good poem.

Thanks people, it’s nice to write rhymes after so much argument on the other threads. Purifies the soul.

Yeah it’s nice in here isn’t it? A sanctuary. Big stuffed chairs, a fireplace, a well-stocked bar. And friendly conversation. Stick around.

Okay, who’s got a poem?