I dont think that your symbolism has enough hints in it to be of any value to the readers, im sorry. Do you have an objective version of the general message of this data? Did you just write it for your own pleasure?
The name of the thread made me think that it had a very deep meaning, but i got nothing out of it so was wondering if you could help clerify, thanks.
Shit… hmhmhmhm…
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What i was asking was what was the true meaning of your poem?
It looked almost like a whimsical self expression that was spawned by state of mind rather then communication about some part of the real world.
Posting sucks, lets just chat and waste our time that way.
Its better then TV, atleast its semi social.
Do you have msn or yahoo chat?
If you do you can PM me the contact address.