…and so
the show must go on, still
for All’s fair in love and war…
for those who’t think they for them they write
comes from them as welll
Who dwell in one’s heart
.
The show never ends, unless One stays in
A thing that hermitics are wont to do!
…a good thing I’m mostly hermitic
…a bad thing that it isn’t perpetually dusk
…where hearts dwell, in perpetuity.
“A good think it’s not continuously dusk, I meant this but got the opposite”
that is:
“A bad thing it’s not continuously dusk”
Maybe got it convoluted?
The time to “be” is here and now.
The past a shell of emptiness.
Open your hands and let it “fall”.
lol
Iambic tetrameter is like Greek or math to me.
You did it! Your poem I mean. Think about the rhythm of the words, or technically of the syllables.
“ba BA ba BA ba BA ba BA”
Notice there are four groups of “ba BA” in the line. As long as the syllables of the words make that pattern ten you’re good. You can also vary the amount of them in each line, like a Shakespearean iambic pentameter (means five "ba BA"s per line),
Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?
Thou art more lovely and more temperate
‘after fall so near
What - the curtain downs
Redemption to rear
Grin and , bear the plunge
dews scar let the pier