untitled poem

opinions appreciated. negative or positive are fine. i just like to see what people think of what i write.

Hello selfless stranger
without hatred possessed.
How far you have come, an
enigma beholden

inside turquoise tulip
houses. Sitting upon
a black and white world with
helplessness protruding.

Painless torture throwing
conscious hatred between
two parts of my ego where
confusion converses

without pausing between
orange clamors escaped
from the hole in my face.
Thoughtfully flailing

I quickly grab the hues
tumbling from my mouth
because the planet is
supposed to be black and white.