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Re: Haiku Tag

Posted:
Tue Aug 23, 2016 11:06 pm
by Meno_
discerning landscape!
Shadows blue, deference who?
Tell, why, do you shew.
Re: Haiku Tag

Posted:
Wed Aug 24, 2016 1:39 am
by Ultimate Philosophy 1001
Arcturus Descending wrote:Ultimate Philosophy 1001 wrote:Arcturus Descending wrote: 
The lord has spoken.
I am a lord, but only your lord.

I see.

So when it is convenient for you, Trixie, you become lord not - what is it lordess? lol
I have no lord. I serve no one except perhaps only that within myself which calls to me...my Self.
And that is precisely why you need me to be your lord.

Re: Haiku Tag

Posted:
Thu Aug 25, 2016 4:35 pm
by MagsJ
Tell, why, do you shew
Best to keep the self within?
Bound by need and want.
Re: Haiku Tag

Posted:
Thu Aug 25, 2016 4:47 pm
by Arcturus Descending
Bound by need and want
a precarious journey
he blindly pursued.
Re: Haiku Tag

Posted:
Thu Aug 25, 2016 6:24 pm
by Fixed Cross
He blindly pursued
the snake through the garbagebelt
and cut his right foot.
Re: Haiku Tag

Posted:
Tue Aug 30, 2016 11:43 pm
by MagsJ
and cut his right foot
still walking the path most trod
despite the hazards
Re: Haiku Tag

Posted:
Thu Sep 01, 2016 9:54 am
by Meno_
despite the hazards
The heart will conquer in-spite
enormous loss, appearent
Re: Haiku Tag

Posted:
Thu Sep 01, 2016 11:36 pm
by Lev Muishkin
jerkey wrote:despite the hazards
The heart will conquer in-spite
enormous loss, appearent
Enormous loss apparent.
never transparent
but obscure though each lived day
Re: Haiku Tag

Posted:
Fri Sep 02, 2016 4:28 pm
by Ierrellus
Reminder for haiku--syllables 5-7-5.
Re: Haiku Tag

Posted:
Tue Sep 06, 2016 10:19 pm
by Lev Muishkin
Ierrellus wrote:Reminder for haiku--syllables 5-7-5.
Enormous loss apparent.
but obscure though each lived day
never transparent
Re: Haiku Tag

Posted:
Thu Sep 08, 2016 4:07 am
by Meno_
never transparent
Enormous loss for some gain
Shone some one many
Re: Haiku Tag

Posted:
Fri Sep 09, 2016 10:56 am
by Lev Muishkin
jerkey wrote:never transparent
Enormous loss for some gain
Shone some one many
Shone some one many
Confused Incoherence is
hard to follow well
Re: Haiku Tag

Posted:
Fri Sep 09, 2016 11:28 pm
by Ecmandu
Fucking blasphemy
Eternally damned just for
Living a life here
Re: Haiku Tag

Posted:
Sat Sep 10, 2016 12:32 am
by MagsJ
Lev Muishkin wrote:hard to follow well
Hard to follow well
Keeping up with the other
Don't watch them, watch you.
Re: Haiku Tag

Posted:
Sat Sep 10, 2016 7:54 pm
by Meno_
MagsJ wrote:Lev Muishkin wrote:hard to follow well
Hard to follow well
Keeping up with the other
Don't watch them, watch you.
Don't watch them, watch you.
Lest timber in thy eye blind
Unto children's play
Re: Haiku Tag

Posted:
Sat Sep 10, 2016 10:46 pm
by MagsJ
jerkey wrote:Unto child play
..one syllable short

Re: Haiku Tag

Posted:
Sat Sep 10, 2016 11:27 pm
by Meno_
MagsJ wrote:jerkey wrote:Unto child play
..one syllable short

Gad's I was right, You Are a perfectionist, hands down. Wouldn't have thought You'd see it.
Clever double down.
Re: Haiku Tag

Posted:
Sun Sep 11, 2016 2:03 am
by MagsJ
jerkey wrote:MagsJ wrote:..one syllable short

Gad's I was right, You Are a perfectionist, hands down. Wouldn't have thought You'd see it.
Guess I'm just a stickler for the rules when it comes to such things...
Unto children's play
Enough time for adult things
Lost years remain lost
Re: Haiku Tag

Posted:
Sun Sep 11, 2016 9:06 pm
by Meno_
Lost years remain lost
How ever recaptured in time
As they must all ways
Re: Haiku Tag

Posted:
Thu Sep 15, 2016 1:34 pm
by Ierrellus
jerkey wrote:Lost years remain lost
How ever recaptured in time
As they must all ways
The second line has eight syllables. Haiku pattern remains 5--7--5.
Re: Haiku Tag

Posted:
Sun Sep 18, 2016 1:12 am
by MagsJ
As they must all ways
As one way is not enough
Many roads to take
Re: Haiku Tag

Posted:
Mon Sep 19, 2016 3:05 am
by Meno_
Many roads to take
But only one at a time
Other ones let go
Re: Haiku Tag

Posted:
Thu Sep 29, 2016 4:56 pm
by Pezerocles
Other ones let go
I can see these here hanging
A second longer
Re: Haiku Tag

Posted:
Thu Sep 29, 2016 6:26 pm
by Meno_
A second longer
Appears as Eternity
time flows 4 ward's keep
Re: Haiku Tag

Posted:
Thu Sep 29, 2016 7:01 pm
by Pezerocles
Time flows 4 ward's keep
Into the depths of oceans
Ward 3 is jealous