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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Orbie » Sun Mar 29, 2015 3:19 am

But apathy more
And matter to those you love,
Less to those who not


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In answer to your prayer
sincere, the centre of
your circle here,
i stand ; and , without
taking thought,-
i know nothing. But i can

Full well your need-as
you be men
This: Re-Creation. With a
bow,
Then, your obedient

servant now.
One gift is all i find in me,
And that is faithful
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Ierrellus » Sun Mar 29, 2015 2:55 pm

Less to those who not
Believe that life is Holy
For all who know it.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Lev Muishkin » Mon Mar 30, 2015 12:00 am

Theres more to Haiku
Than typing out random words
Try to feel something.

Not meaningless nonse.
But words that bring together
Your Heart With your head.

"Science is entirely Faith Based.... Obama is Muslim....Evil is the opposition to life (e-v-i-l <=> l-i-v-e ... and not by accident). Without evil there could be no life.", James S. Saint.
"The Holocaust was the fault of the Jews; The Holocaust was not genocide", Kriswest
"A Tortoise is a Turtle", Wizard
" Hitler didn't create the Nazis. In reality, the Judists did ... for a purpose of their own. Hitler was merely one they chose to head it up after they discovered the Judist betrayal in WW1, their "Judas Iscariot";James S Saint.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Orbie » Mon Mar 30, 2015 12:30 am

Lev Muishkin wrote:Theres more to Haiku
Than typing out random words
Try to feel something.

Not meaningless nonse.


But words that bring together
Your Heart With your head.


To all who know it
Your heart with Your head assumed
Non sense will, sense make
[size=50][/size]Allone's Obe issance



In answer to your prayer
sincere, the centre of
your circle here,
i stand ; and , without
taking thought,-
i know nothing. But i can

Full well your need-as
you be men
This: Re-Creation. With a
bow,
Then, your obedient

servant now.
One gift is all i find in me,
And that is faithful
memory
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Lev Muishkin » Mon Mar 30, 2015 10:41 am

Orb wrote:
Lev Muishkin wrote:Theres more to Haiku
Than typing out random words
Try to feel something.

Not meaningless nonse.


But words that bring together
Your Heart With your head.


To all who know it
Your heart with Your head assumed
Non sense will, sense make


Non sense will, sense make
to those who are deluded
The truth lies elsewhere

"Science is entirely Faith Based.... Obama is Muslim....Evil is the opposition to life (e-v-i-l <=> l-i-v-e ... and not by accident). Without evil there could be no life.", James S. Saint.
"The Holocaust was the fault of the Jews; The Holocaust was not genocide", Kriswest
"A Tortoise is a Turtle", Wizard
" Hitler didn't create the Nazis. In reality, the Judists did ... for a purpose of their own. Hitler was merely one they chose to head it up after they discovered the Judist betrayal in WW1, their "Judas Iscariot";James S Saint.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Lev Muishkin » Mon Mar 30, 2015 10:47 am

Orb wrote:But apathy more
And matter to those you love,
Less to those who not


tagging along


The reason for my response to this was the grammar.
Why "not", when "Don't" Has the same syllabary content, but makes sense.

"less to those who dont"

"Science is entirely Faith Based.... Obama is Muslim....Evil is the opposition to life (e-v-i-l <=> l-i-v-e ... and not by accident). Without evil there could be no life.", James S. Saint.
"The Holocaust was the fault of the Jews; The Holocaust was not genocide", Kriswest
"A Tortoise is a Turtle", Wizard
" Hitler didn't create the Nazis. In reality, the Judists did ... for a purpose of their own. Hitler was merely one they chose to head it up after they discovered the Judist betrayal in WW1, their "Judas Iscariot";James S Saint.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Orbie » Mon Mar 30, 2015 2:01 pm

I used 'not' instead of don't for a different reason, to explicit the negation, rather then emphasizing the effect of the excercise of the will, to simply refuse to do it, without actually needing to know the reason.
It's in line with the trend of my overall view, of which I am becoming more and more aware, that there is a negation going on within even persons not capable to realize that, a negation preceding the actual act of refusing to acknowledge, and the. Acting in accordance with such realization,

it is the difference between acting as if, the knowledge of the reason was irrelevant, or, simply a subconscious act , without the need to find out why?
[size=50][/size]Allone's Obe issance



In answer to your prayer
sincere, the centre of
your circle here,
i stand ; and , without
taking thought,-
i know nothing. But i can

Full well your need-as
you be men
This: Re-Creation. With a
bow,
Then, your obedient

servant now.
One gift is all i find in me,
And that is faithful
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Ierrellus » Mon Mar 30, 2015 2:08 pm

The truth lies elsewhere
For those who beat dead horses
With lies to themselves.
"We must love one another or die." W.H.Auden
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Orbie » Mon Mar 30, 2015 2:22 pm

With lies to themselves,
Art excuse hyperbolas
Write, automatic
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In answer to your prayer
sincere, the centre of
your circle here,
i stand ; and , without
taking thought,-
i know nothing. But i can

Full well your need-as
you be men
This: Re-Creation. With a
bow,
Then, your obedient

servant now.
One gift is all i find in me,
And that is faithful
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Lev Muishkin » Mon Mar 30, 2015 3:00 pm

Orb wrote:I used 'not' instead of don't for a different reason, to explicit the negation, rather then emphasizing the effect of the excercise of the will, to simply refuse to do it, without actually needing to know the reason.
It's in line with the trend of my overall view, of which I am becoming more and more aware, that there is a negation going on within even persons not capable to realize that, a negation preceding the actual act of refusing to acknowledge, and the. Acting in accordance with such realization,

it is the difference between acting as if, the knowledge of the reason was irrelevant, or, simply a subconscious act , without the need to find out why?


It's ungrammatical, and therefore you have a loss of meaning.

"Science is entirely Faith Based.... Obama is Muslim....Evil is the opposition to life (e-v-i-l <=> l-i-v-e ... and not by accident). Without evil there could be no life.", James S. Saint.
"The Holocaust was the fault of the Jews; The Holocaust was not genocide", Kriswest
"A Tortoise is a Turtle", Wizard
" Hitler didn't create the Nazis. In reality, the Judists did ... for a purpose of their own. Hitler was merely one they chose to head it up after they discovered the Judist betrayal in WW1, their "Judas Iscariot";James S Saint.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Lev Muishkin » Mon Mar 30, 2015 3:01 pm

Ierrellus wrote:The truth lies elsewhere
For those who beat dead horses
With lies to themselves.


With lies to themseles
now you got that right at least
At last you admit.

"Science is entirely Faith Based.... Obama is Muslim....Evil is the opposition to life (e-v-i-l <=> l-i-v-e ... and not by accident). Without evil there could be no life.", James S. Saint.
"The Holocaust was the fault of the Jews; The Holocaust was not genocide", Kriswest
"A Tortoise is a Turtle", Wizard
" Hitler didn't create the Nazis. In reality, the Judists did ... for a purpose of their own. Hitler was merely one they chose to head it up after they discovered the Judist betrayal in WW1, their "Judas Iscariot";James S Saint.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Arcturus Descending » Mon Mar 30, 2015 3:12 pm

at last you admit

to knowing nothing - and thus

you have wisely learned!
"Look closely. The beautiful may be small."


"Two things fill the mind with ever new and increasing admiration and awe, the oftener and more steadily we reflect on them: the starry heavens above me and the moral law within me."


“Whereas the beautiful is limited, the sublime is limitless, so that the mind in the presence of the sublime, attempting to imagine what it cannot, has pain in the failure but pleasure in contemplating the immensity of the attempt.”

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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Orbie » Mon Mar 30, 2015 3:36 pm

You have wisely learned!

Of the nothing, and some thing

And of every thing.
[size=50][/size]Allone's Obe issance



In answer to your prayer
sincere, the centre of
your circle here,
i stand ; and , without
taking thought,-
i know nothing. But i can

Full well your need-as
you be men
This: Re-Creation. With a
bow,
Then, your obedient

servant now.
One gift is all i find in me,
And that is faithful
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Oughtist » Wed Jun 03, 2015 5:05 pm

and of every thing
there is an other and there
is an other ænd
Things are apparent.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Arcturus Descending » Wed Jun 03, 2015 7:40 pm

Oughtist wrote:and of every thing
there is an other and there
is an other ænd


is an other aend

the inquisitive beetle

questions ~~ what is AEND!?


Hey stranger. where have you flown in from? Good to read you/see you.
Hope you're well.
"Look closely. The beautiful may be small."


"Two things fill the mind with ever new and increasing admiration and awe, the oftener and more steadily we reflect on them: the starry heavens above me and the moral law within me."


“Whereas the beautiful is limited, the sublime is limitless, so that the mind in the presence of the sublime, attempting to imagine what it cannot, has pain in the failure but pleasure in contemplating the immensity of the attempt.”

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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Lev Muishkin » Wed Jun 03, 2015 9:34 pm

Arcturus Descending wrote:
Oughtist wrote:and of every thing
there is an other and there
is an other ænd


is an other aend

the inquisitive beetle

questions ~~ what is AEND!?


Hey stranger. where have you flown in from? Good to read you/see you.
Hope you're well.


AEND is Aeneid
Spelt bad that tale by Virgil
the hero of Troy

"Science is entirely Faith Based.... Obama is Muslim....Evil is the opposition to life (e-v-i-l <=> l-i-v-e ... and not by accident). Without evil there could be no life.", James S. Saint.
"The Holocaust was the fault of the Jews; The Holocaust was not genocide", Kriswest
"A Tortoise is a Turtle", Wizard
" Hitler didn't create the Nazis. In reality, the Judists did ... for a purpose of their own. Hitler was merely one they chose to head it up after they discovered the Judist betrayal in WW1, their "Judas Iscariot";James S Saint.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Arcturus Descending » Wed Jun 03, 2015 9:44 pm

Lev Muishkin wrote:
Arcturus Descending wrote:
Oughtist wrote:and of every thing
there is an other and there
is an other ænd


is an other aend

the inquisitive beetle

questions ~~ what is AEND!?


Hey stranger. where have you flown in from? Good to read you/see you.
Hope you're well.


AEND is Aeneid


Spelt bad that tale by Virgil
the hero of Troy


That's what I thought at first but when I googled the word to be certain I got nonsense.
"Look closely. The beautiful may be small."


"Two things fill the mind with ever new and increasing admiration and awe, the oftener and more steadily we reflect on them: the starry heavens above me and the moral law within me."


“Whereas the beautiful is limited, the sublime is limitless, so that the mind in the presence of the sublime, attempting to imagine what it cannot, has pain in the failure but pleasure in contemplating the immensity of the attempt.”

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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Lev Muishkin » Wed Jun 03, 2015 10:00 pm

Arcturus Descending wrote:
Lev Muishkin wrote:
Arcturus Descending wrote:is an other aend

the inquisitive beetle

questions ~~ what is AEND!?


Hey stranger. where have you flown in from? Good to read you/see you.
Hope you're well.


AEND is Aeneid


Spelt bad that tale by Virgil
the hero of Troy


That's what I thought at first but when I googled the word to be certain I got nonsense.


I thought "The Hero of Troy" would make a nice start to a haiku

"Science is entirely Faith Based.... Obama is Muslim....Evil is the opposition to life (e-v-i-l <=> l-i-v-e ... and not by accident). Without evil there could be no life.", James S. Saint.
"The Holocaust was the fault of the Jews; The Holocaust was not genocide", Kriswest
"A Tortoise is a Turtle", Wizard
" Hitler didn't create the Nazis. In reality, the Judists did ... for a purpose of their own. Hitler was merely one they chose to head it up after they discovered the Judist betrayal in WW1, their "Judas Iscariot";James S Saint.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Oughtist » Wed Jun 03, 2015 11:33 pm

Ha, I'll go with that (Aeneas is, as it happens, my middle name (from a conceit of my Scots ancestors who were in the practice of swapping traditional names (in this case Angus) with more erudite ones to reflect their gooder learning)... though I was actually just juxtaposing and & end.

Doing good Arc, just havent had much intelligent to say for quite a while ... I do occasionally lurk though ;)

The hero of Troy
travels a widely known world
and ends up roamin'
Things are apparent.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Ierrellus » Thu Jun 04, 2015 2:58 pm

And ends up roaming--
All those who expect to find
Other than than themselves.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Orbie » Fri Jun 05, 2015 5:24 am

Other then themselves

They, who , into himself are,

There, never the less.
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In answer to your prayer
sincere, the centre of
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i stand ; and , without
taking thought,-
i know nothing. But i can

Full well your need-as
you be men
This: Re-Creation. With a
bow,
Then, your obedient

servant now.
One gift is all i find in me,
And that is faithful
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Lev Muishkin » Fri Jun 05, 2015 3:04 pm

Never the Less
Is it more than twas before?
Maybe tis the same?

"Science is entirely Faith Based.... Obama is Muslim....Evil is the opposition to life (e-v-i-l <=> l-i-v-e ... and not by accident). Without evil there could be no life.", James S. Saint.
"The Holocaust was the fault of the Jews; The Holocaust was not genocide", Kriswest
"A Tortoise is a Turtle", Wizard
" Hitler didn't create the Nazis. In reality, the Judists did ... for a purpose of their own. Hitler was merely one they chose to head it up after they discovered the Judist betrayal in WW1, their "Judas Iscariot";James S Saint.
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Arcturus Descending » Fri Jun 05, 2015 3:11 pm

Maybe tis the same?

always - so fleeting is fame

Little in a name.
"Look closely. The beautiful may be small."


"Two things fill the mind with ever new and increasing admiration and awe, the oftener and more steadily we reflect on them: the starry heavens above me and the moral law within me."


“Whereas the beautiful is limited, the sublime is limitless, so that the mind in the presence of the sublime, attempting to imagine what it cannot, has pain in the failure but pleasure in contemplating the immensity of the attempt.”

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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby Orbie » Fri Jun 05, 2015 3:18 pm

Little in a name

numbers concern more, to end -

osymbiosis.
[size=50][/size]Allone's Obe issance



In answer to your prayer
sincere, the centre of
your circle here,
i stand ; and , without
taking thought,-
i know nothing. But i can

Full well your need-as
you be men
This: Re-Creation. With a
bow,
Then, your obedient

servant now.
One gift is all i find in me,
And that is faithful
memory
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Re: Haiku Tag

Postby jonquil » Fri Jun 05, 2015 9:49 pm

A symbiosis
Aery gold and melted clouds
stamped on Grecian urns
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