despite the hazards
The heart will conquer in-spite
enormous loss, appearent
despite the hazards
The heart will conquer in-spite
enormous loss, appearent
Enormous loss apparent.
never transparent
but obscure though each lived day
Reminder for haiku–syllables 5-7-5.
Enormous loss apparent.
but obscure though each lived day
never transparent
never transparent
Enormous loss for some gain
Shone some one many
Shone some one many
Confused Incoherence is
hard to follow well
Fucking blasphemy
Eternally damned just for
Living a life here
Hard to follow well
Keeping up with the other
Don’t watch them, watch you.
Don’t watch them, watch you.
Lest timber in thy eye blind
Unto children’s play
Unto child play
…one syllable short
jerkey:Unto child play
…one syllable short
Gad’s I was right, You Are a perfectionist, hands down. Wouldn’t have thought You’d see it.
Clever double down.
MagsJ:
…one syllable short
Gad’s I was right, You Are a perfectionist, hands down. Wouldn’t have thought You’d see it.
Guess I’m just a stickler for the rules when it comes to such things…
Unto children’s play
Enough time for adult things
Lost years remain lost
Lost years remain lost
How ever recaptured in time
As they must all ways
Lost years remain lost
How ever recaptured in time
As they must all ways
The second line has eight syllables. Haiku pattern remains 5–7–5.
As they must all ways
As one way is not enough
Many roads to take
Many roads to take
But only one at a time
Other ones let go
Other ones let go
I can see these here hanging
A second longer
A second longer
Appears as Eternity
time flows 4 ward’s keep
Time flows 4 ward’s keep
Into the depths of oceans
Ward 3 is jealous
Ward 3 is jealous.
No pudding for them today!
Hangs their heads and cries.