Haiku Tag

Enormous loss apparent.
never transparent
but obscure though each lived day

Reminder for haiku–syllables 5-7-5.

Enormous loss apparent.
but obscure though each lived day
never transparent

never transparent

Enormous loss for some gain

Shone some one many

Shone some one many
Confused Incoherence is
hard to follow well

Fucking blasphemy
Eternally damned just for
Living a life here

Hard to follow well

Keeping up with the other

Don’t watch them, watch you.

Don’t watch them, watch you.

Lest timber in thy eye blind

Unto children’s play

…one syllable short :wink:

Gad’s I was right, You Are a perfectionist, hands down. Wouldn’t have thought You’d see it.

Clever double down.

Guess I’m just a stickler for the rules when it comes to such things…

Unto children’s play

Enough time for adult things

Lost years remain lost

Lost years remain lost

How ever recaptured in time

As they must all ways

The second line has eight syllables. Haiku pattern remains 5–7–5.

As they must all ways

As one way is not enough

Many roads to take

Many roads to take
But only one at a time
Other ones let go

Other ones let go
I can see these here hanging
A second longer

A second longer
Appears as Eternity
time flows 4 ward’s keep

Time flows 4 ward’s keep
Into the depths of oceans
Ward 3 is jealous

Ward 3 is jealous.
No pudding for them today!
Hangs their heads and cries.

Hang their heads and cries.

4th ends with 6s,7 with 9’s,

Head their hangs and laughs.