I put my book away for a while, to give it space and after coming back to it,
I still believe in it. I am writing a two page synopsis of my book to send off
to agents. Reducing a 270 page book to a 2 page synopsis isn’t easy.
After working for a week on it, I have this but I have my doubts, so
kids, that is where you come in have your say in my synopsis.
What do you think?
The COST OF PARADISE is a book that dares to challenge everything we believe in
today and it does so in a thoughtful and brave way.
In the future, 9444266 is a factory worker who gets fired for a minor infraction.
As he no longer has a worker card, all 9444266 has, is the borrowed clothes on his back.
Without a place to stay, he begins to walk the streets of the city.
He finds himself in a small forest with a group of people who call themselves
“the community”. In this community, he learns there is a different path, a different
way of life for human beings. It is not about work, a job, making money or being a consumer,
but life is about finding out, who you are. In an effort to learn more, 9444266 returns to the
business world, this time as retail manager and he learns a vital truth. There is no freedom
in the business world because everyone is held hostage to this idea of the pursuit of profit.
As long as profits are valued higher then humans, we have a nihilistic world.
But how to break free?
To break free leads him to choosing between the religious path or the philosophical path.
He chooses the religious and we follow this path of freedom in his life.
After thinking, discussing, debating, he rejects the religious path and
turns to the philosophical. He asks, what is the meaning of life, what
is the purpose of life and how do we find freedom?
In part three, the forest is overrun by forces wanting the land and
the community loses everything. The debate becomes, what is
the community to do? After debate, the community decides to make a stand against
the modern capitalist world. The community wins because people are ready for a change,
ready to learn what is really possible for humans beings.
The last chapter end with 9444266 in old age and ready for death.
Here we learn of his choice of a new name. His name means
“night has passed” and it has and a new age begins.
OK, kids, would you read this book based on this?
Don’t sugar coat because that won’t help me.
If its crap, say so and why.
Kropotkin