bad poem

it occurs to me that i have been too guarded!
as if i first had to establish some credentials
in order to be taken seriously…

if a man claims to be an Idiot- you will not be disappointed! (ambiguous)

the Art of appearance
is clearer than
the deceptions
of the apparent…
(does that make sense?)

What is poetry…? A needle and thread…

poetry is trying to
happen right now
between fingers
mind and keyboard

can poetry actually
be written on computers?
I seriously doubt it.
This is not a poem.

Vain artless diatribe.

The predominance of BAD poetry
far out weighs good poetry
poetry is itself the limp
flower of the human spirit
a kind of honest-femininity!
a kind of soul jerking
honesty monstering
wound sharing
neutral ground
that nobody
can stand together
for too long

how much do you really
want to know about a
person?

in the final analysis
we are all thin
snippets of paper in
a cheap book

fragmentary
wandering
mooncalfs
of chance

…paper dolls. Bad Poem may not be a poem (to you), but I like it. …at the moment, perhaps, I’m drawn to “Vain artless diatribe” (as you call it.) :confused:

I really like this piece. The absurdity of poetry, yes? I hear you, I understand – thank you. But its very ironic, anti-poetry that is. The contradictions, the absurdity…

And where but in poetry can man embrace the contradictions? Perhaps you are a fan of Whitman, who seems to have, more clearly than most, hammered that point (embracing the contradictions).

The irony will always be that anti-poetry is poetry, anti-art is art – the age of irony, indeed.

p.s.

This poem actually seems to me to be targeted at Bukowski – I know it probably isn’t, but I think you can see why I make the connection.

I read Bukowski quite a lot. (I hope I am not just a cheap imitation)

I have always written in a kind of anti-art-art manner…what more can a person say other than I am sincere in what I write…sincerely bad perhaps!

Glad you “got something” from the poem! Cheers.

Poems for poetrys’ sake;
Thought profound;
If rhymes there;
So what?
Lakes for waters’ sake;
If lotus blooms;
Swans bathe;
And fish swim;
So what?
Good or Bad;
Songs that are;
Tales of heart and soul;
Are beautiful.

you mean good poem, right?