blind part

Supple
meant to quiver a
bout these
emptied parts searching for a relation.

Inadequacies are as disposable as

yourself
today

that is to say you
are not
at any person’s disposal at all
No. Instead you are
sheltered in a

broken
moment

i like your writings, like a few others here. poetical many are not, but never the less, engrossing; an adventure through other eyes.

I too like your style, Alexis.

thank you both. my style at the moment is based off of algebra.

the message is live and direct…clear…

i can see the equation of sorts.
the path of the logic of the poetic expression

there is a
nice ease
to this poem
its expression
entire
there
not up in the air

so to speak

good good :wink: