Do you think this rhyme is fucking cool?
I think I’ve come up with something that just about everyone would think is fucking cool, which is rare. But I wanna test my hypothesis, hence the poll. The rhyme is as follows:
If you’re uncool, fear if I pass by ya,
'Cos I be into carrying the spirit of Elijah.
(with female vocal ‘YOU’RE AWED!!!’ mixed over the second line.)
You sure that’s not spelled “Odd”?
cigarettes aren’t cool.
and what the hell does smoking during sex have to do with the spirit of elijah!!!
Yeah, I’m not talking about sex (unless you’re crazy). Perhaps if it was in context that’d be clear.
[size=150]Note: The rhyme has been ammended (refer to OP). I’ve allowed re-voting so you can change your vote if you like.[/size]
sorry Imp!
Remind me not to stand near you Impious
Eeeeeeeewwwwww.
http://www.biblicalstudies.org.uk/article_elijah.html
I gave it a yes, because, of the all important gross factor.
Impious:
Open your ears up and listen,
These words are ripe so you don’t want to miss them-
Written with blood bled in awareness and schiz,
Mapping out this archetype that’s arisen.
I actually find THESE words more interesting, sort of like a riddle. Are they your own or borrowed.
Makes me want more – what are “these words” and what is the archetype. Archetypes are so extremely interesting.
Perhaps I am just being obtuse.
They’re my words. It’s from a hip hop tack I put together some time back (and which was never produced professionally), but I feel they also apply to what I post here. BTW an archetype (in the context I’m using the word) is (basically) a significantly unique form.
I voted for mildly cool.
The rhyme would have been, “fucking cool,” had you had the same number of syllables in each line.
Or if you had written it in the form of a Haiku.
Or if I had to translate it from Sanskrit.
Or if the rhyme had a lower temperature.
…now that’s a novel angle to see it from, but an interesting one to see it from!
I think this rhyme is not fucking cool.
I think believing everyone would think it is shows massive naivety on your part.
Oh yeah, by ‘everyone’ I meant everyone who’s abundantly real. All you know-nothings I couldn’t give two shits about.
i still don’t get the spirit of elijah remark…
is that a lord of the rings refrence? ( )
P.S
impious,
Your fuckin stupid,
Like sex with a dumb person.
it’s not fucking cool
but it is cool
Really?
Moi?
gibberish.