Elijah's return (unfinished project)

For a project of mine called The third book of kings:

Elijah flew down to Earth in a whirlwind to banish the Sphinx. Then he brought a Holy Forty to Melbourne to banish the unholy fire which threatened to consume the city. Holy Fire lovingly touched his extremeties before a flash of light helped prevent disaster. Afterwards he walked through Sodom, where those who give up the best without question are damned before banishing the Devil who had returned there.

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I’m not sure how it ends yet, though.

Comments, anyone?

Words escape me…

I bless thee. (nah, just kidding… or, perhaps?)

Bump: The crux of the first draft is done (and to be honest, I’d rather leave the rest of the story, and perhaps even the polishing of the crux, to Factorus or someone like him). And in case any of you are wondering about this story, history can be told in many ways- and this is one of them.

Bump! I think I’ve completed the final draft (of my part, at least). One little thing- I’m not sure if it was a Holy Fifty or a Holy Eighty or what not. Perhaps someone could enlighten me to the truth of the matter? I can’t be bothered searching news sites. (EDIT: I think from memory it was a Holy Forty but I’m not enitrely sure).

It seems like scripture… no flow…

Did you know a lot of scriptures are written in a poetic manner?

Through translation they become dry…

It lacks naturalness