For Jim Morrison

Closed Door

Adonis, ripe with pouty lip
And cold, reptillian eye,
Hot-packaged for the latest trip,
Designed to fly,

What was it you were running from
That swiftly ran you down?
Dark forests of the night had come
Ablaze downtown.

The lizard on the smoldering rock
Had surfaced in the street.
Was this alone your fatal shock–
Your personal heat?

And was there something not well hid
Behind that flicking tongue?
Behind an eye’s half-opened lid
Where songs are sung?

And did that primal scream contain
Your own cry for escape
From where excess, for all its gain,
Includes self-rape?

Hey Jim, that wasn’t Nietzsche’s jive
For madness can’t redeem.
It lets the legend stay alive,
But kills the dream.

Images are from Blake’s “The Tiger”, etc. J. M. loved Blake and Nietzsche.

And did that primal scream contain
Your own cry for escape
From where excess, for all its gain,
Includes self-rape?

Hey Jim, that wasn’t Nietzche’s jive
For madness can’t redeem.
It lets the legend stay alive,
But kills the dream.

So beautiful.

(little aside) I just wanted to let you know that I am aware of your masterful control of cesuras - you seem to have a real ear for musical variation, in terms of rhythm.

That last stanza is a hella good closing stanza.

lhw - AKA: The Straight-faced Clown AKA: M.C. Tape-Hiss

TUM and LHW,
Thanks for fellow poets who like music and imagery. Morrison epitomized the sixties, a time when we believed we were burned out at age thirty; so we had to “fire all of our guns. . . and explode into space” (Steppenwolf.) Many, who are not aware of J.M.'s music and ideas, will not get the references to his calling himself the lizard king or the reasons for designing this poem from Blake’s poems. Thanks for understanding and appreciation.

I’m embarrased to admit that it was only recently that I learned that Mr. Mojo Risin is an anagram of his name. My son had to tell me. Kids. It should have been me telling him.

Rainey,
“Wayne’s World” reintroduced the kids to Jim. And Mike Myers seemed to love the concept of mojo, using it in his Austin Powers flicks. The kids got the fun without the heartache!!! But the heartache made the songs.

Jim Moorrison was a large reason I became a poet - one of a handful of early influences on my development as a poet. Much of my early efforts in poetry a decade and a half and more ago was styled after his free-form stream-of-consciousness. Jim Morrison is probably the most unique, and still least understood, personalitlies to emerge from the pantheon of late '60’s pop culture figures - the same should be said of the Doors as a whole in terms of the role they played in the late '60’s So-Cal/LA/SF music scene. They were the most original concept line-up of musicians for a major rock act of that time with a poet lead singer, a Hammodg organ player (Ray Manzerik - sp?) and a guitarist who was more inclined towards the Jazz mode rather than rock. There were more original, inventive band concepts going on at that time but largely in what was in the “underground” at that time - mostly outside the U.S. at that. Jim, to me, was a rock star, yes, but also more than a rock star - the truest and closest thing to a pure artist that the late '60’s pop culture had to offer. I don’t mean to say he was the greatest frontman, musician, vocalist or poet of that time. He was part of that time period and helped to define it and was defined by it, but he was also one of the few figures that paradoxically transcended that time period and resisted being defined and, therefore, confined by it. I feel, as the years since his death stretch into further decades from now, he will be truly more appreciated as the poet he was - not necessarily among the all-time greats, but certainly better appreciated for his contributions to the art/craft. It’s not that he’s not now appreciated for that contribution, but even 35+ years since he died, I think his presense as a classic rock radio staple still has him stuck in modern pop culture’s collective conscious perception mostly --to his, and our, detriment-- as a rock star, but as time goes on I think academia will more and more accept him into the ranks of important 20th Century poets - American or otherwise. HIs interest in the beat poets, ancient and modern philosophers and obscure early 20th Century Blues musicians, and promotion thereof, largely impacted my own interest in them as well. The same goes for his love of Greek and other mythologies of ancient times as well as Native American culture. Yes, he was a part of the late-'60’s L.A. music scene/culture, but he most definitely was not exactly a hippie --too much of a nihilistic existentialist for that classification–, but he was also not entirely one of the proto-punks/proto-metalists/genre-benders that were just emerging at that time whose own impact was not to be seen until the '70’s like: Iggy Pop; David Bowie; MC-5; Lou Reed/Velvet Underground; Patti Smith; Alice Copper; New York Dolls; Jonathan Richman; Tom Waits; et. al. He was more like a darker Elvis-figure with a pagan philosopher’s soul. Even though I’ve moved on from my initial infatuation with JM’s poetry style in my early poetry efforts as I’ve evolved and matured as a poet, I believe I still retain a small stamp of his impact on me.

I think the closest thing the '90’s alternative culture had to a Jim Morrison-type figure was Mark Sandman of Morphine fame. I think, as time goes by, he will be greater appreciated for his unique approach to music --2-string slide bass vocalist with saxaphone, drums/percussion and no lead guitarist as his minimal line-up, for instance-- and, most-especially, his poetic soul. It’s too bad he died --of natural causes and on-stage, at that-- on the cusp of becoming more widely known by the mainstream culture at large at that time (6-yrs. ago). I love, admire and respect Kurt Cobain and appreciate his contribution to the '90’s music scene/culture and value his poetic soul as well; but, as time goes by, I have a feeling that Mark Sandman will be greater appreciated than he is right now, and at least equally with KC. If this mention of Mark Sandman is your first encounter of him, I suggest you buy at least one of Morphine’s several albums - any will do, but I suggest their 2nd “Cure For Pain” as the best introduction. It’s not necessarily their best per-se, but it is the release that put them on the map of national alt-rock consciousness at that time. Also, check out the Mark Sandman 2-disc (w/ bonus DVD) “Sandbox” anthology that came out a year or two ago - mostly focusses on his numerous pre-Morphine efforts, along with solo explorations and Morphine side-projects and rare/unheard Morphine tracks as well. Treat Her Right and Candy Bar were just a couple of the other bands he started back in the '80’s Boston (Cambridge specifically) alternative scene before forming Morphine.

–enough from me - my apologies for this lengthy reply,
lhw - AKA: The Straight-faced Clown AKA: M.C. Tape-Hiss

lwh,
Lengthy response enjoyed!!! Yes, the band combination, with Manzarak’s (I can’t spell it either) keyboard jazz preludes and interludes was quite a shock for us Elvis and Buddy Holley fans, a shock of recognition of possibilities for popular music. I hope Morrison gets the recognition he deserves beyond the Mike Myers parodies. What did you think of Stone’s movie, “The Doors”?
We won’t get out of this world alive!!!

Although I had been generally aware of Morrison’s/Door’s music for more than a decade prior to Stone’s movie’s original theatrical release, but it wasn’t until I saw the movie that I became truly aware of his talents and excesses. Aditionally, I was marginally aware of his poetic pursuits, but it wasn’t until the seeing the movie that I truly discovered the depth (and shallowness, too) of his poetry. My awareness of his poetry prior to seeing the movie was largely from friends and fellow middle/high school students who were part of what passed then for the Goth subculture - not to be confused with today’s Brian Warner (AKA: Marilyn Manson) subculture that goes by the Goth sobriquet. The '80’s Goth subculture --should you be unaware-- was more of a post-punk phenomenon of bands like The Cure, Joy Division, et. al. and not like today’s more metal/hard rock-inspired variant of the same name.

Val Kilmer’s portrayal of Jim Morrison was very impressive. I don’t think there was another actor contemporary with that time that could have done a better job. Correct me if I’m wrong, but it was my understanding that William Broad (AKA: Billy Idol) was actually Stone’s first choice, but he went with Kilmer b/c of Idol’s untimely motorcycle accident that kept him un(dis-)ambulatory, although he did end up appearing in a cameo capacity playing a bartender, bouncer or member of another band.

lhw - AKA: The Straight-faced Clown AKA: M.C. Tape-Hiss