Hercules: The Untold Story

Walling in again…
I am in my bunker.
Searching for ammo
Kicking the rats in the scrotum
(Or what might be deemed scrotum if they had one…)
I smoke nervous cigarettes
(Cigarettes are always nervous
It’s in the nature)

My ammo is my excuse for a few more minutes of solitude.
Thud! Thud! Thud!
Must be a couple of bombs over head rattling the earth above me.
It falls upon down a sick brown kind of desolate confetti.
The bombs burst like wombs upon no-man’s-land,
where many men live and die, and many nations too,
and many how centuries have bent and broken there?

Anyhow, I am sure someone is boiling a pot of communal tea
before battle. Someone is praying to Mary, someone to Melanie,
someone to a secret Derek.

I recall some guy saying to me:
‘The existence of the Universe was optional’
Who ticked the dam box? I wonder to myself…
Needing such a choice reconsidered now more than ever

But, my bunker is the entire universe right now…
Young, soft in the head, wandering about my mind
My mind trapped like a rat in a skull
Scratching my scrotum:
wondering if the General will notice my absence

You need a rude awakening Son!
He says with certainty.

Of course, he is right;
Though I won’t tell him that!
to acquiesce to put the hands up clear in the air and say
– it was me, i could not cope! It is hard to admit weakness.
I was foolish and untrained. I was laughing in the face
of responsibilities stone weight.
I wanted to become lost in the whirl of time.
I wanted to elude forever the great seriousness of age
and the great honour of war.

You couldn’t fight your way out of a paper bag.
I was once told. Truth speaks through many passing voices, it’s true.
I had large sheepish brown boy eyes…and I would nod in agreement.
I could not fight my way out of a paper bag.

I am not much of a solider. The war fights itself. All wars are one war.
One perpetual human war: the flowers garland themselves.
The blood is overwrought. I am overwrought.
This whole thing reeks of the navel: a longing for the womb.

But anyway…I’m still soldiering…23, my rife like a snake from some mad taxidermist. My hands like great roots of some mind tree. But I am not much of a mind; I am infantry, infantile, infinite midst the decibels of shells! I’ll be gone in a quick mist.

I could murder a good woman right now. By that I mine, I could love one, I could fold myself into her, but I’m so bad at folding, I do it either to eagerly or not at all, I have all the hallmarks of a bad amateur with women: over confident, self-conscious, showy. But! I am too harsh. They are equally shaky immature flower openers of lust! They could be English, French, Italian, Japanese, but each one I would kiss, with ten times the lips! But enough! These women of love and ball squeeze and heart ache are a million bombs away…and a thousand realities from here.

The top Generals whisper voodoo into each others ears, conspiratorial, stroking some grandiose behemoth scheme, I we you them us our no nothing about. I am riddled with doubt. But it passes…till death do us part. Logistics/practicalities/numbers…from these there is no get away: This is a Commanders Holy Grail. There is no doubt. We soldiers are all part of some grand theatrical performance: one that we have not been asked about. I have only a bit part without lines. We don’t have much time to learn the steps, before we’re on. Bright Light….

Here I am. The rats are at ease. I am thin. My sabre glints its third eye. I am barely a man. But you should see me animal on the park. Trench wise feral and frantic…ready for some kind of destruction, some kind of Agamemnon, some kind of Troy, some kind of Somme, some kind of Las Vegas, some kind of Battlefield.

This is the place where tiny pawns: stand side by side: and explode one way or the other….who rush into the lions jaw…who pour into the fiery chasm of artless war…who rush like fireflies fire wise into the belly of Moloch, Ares, Madeleine, Medusa…who rush, rush hell bent toward the future….screaming like a choir of eunuchs….wailing through bestial throats the blood of Worlds pummelling…

I am Ready. I am Fierce. I am Possessed. I am Fire of Flesh. I am Skyscaper. I am Wall. I am Metal. I am Jaw.

My bullets shall kisses the blood and with that paint themselves and laugh with the shrieks of whores!!

GOD MAKES MEN MAD
BUT SOMETIMES
WAR MAKES MEN GODS
insane enough to return again and again…

This is an excellent “war epic”. The two main colinsign-features are here: good, natural flow/shape, and highly original descriptions/turns of phrase.

There are a few places where I’d be tempted to make some changes, but all in all I’d say this belongs in the next published war poem anthology.

Seriously Colin, you should scroll back through the pages here, gather what you rate as your best work, edit some of it a bit (mainly to correct spellings) and have a go at getting it published.

To me, his structure is pretty abstract.

I sit back and imagine the pictures and possible ideas which the words paint, and Colin gives me new thoughts which I wouldn’t usually have.

Thanks for the encouragement ChimneySweep. I’m beginning to think you are a bit of a wheeze. i.e. Joker.

I think I should scroll back and edit some of the better poems and put them together in a book. I’m already working on it…I’ll let you know.

This needs work, I don’t think it deserves to feature in a war poem anthology…I haven’t lived in a real or experienced a real war. This is a mish mash of intentions and I don’t think it would stand up beside more convention war poems.

Cheers again.

My pleasure. Ha! - yes, it would be fair to say that I don’t take life too seriously.

I’m pleased to hear you’re gonna get some kind of a collection together. Re the war poem, I don’t think your not having been in a war takes much away from it. Of course, it’s always best when you write about X to have experienced X, but you can get away with guessing sometimes.

Sure you have, the Iraq war. Gulf War 1. The Falklands.

Of course I have lived while Wars have taken place and continue to but my main point is that I have not faught in a War.

I suppose fighting in a War isn’t necessarily a prerequisite for writing War Poetry…

That’s something to be proud of.

People aren’t idiots. They don’t need to be shot before they understand that being killed isn’t fun.

I say that observation and estimation are very often good enough to form knowledge. First hand experience is not really all-too-nessessary. There are so many books and studies to read about, and the reader does not have to preform the tests for themself.

'Twas a fine write.