Idiosyncratic language of the future

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Idiosyncratic language of the future
A verbalisation of the future
Its nature and temperament …without pointing directly…

Unless, of course, in accordance with
Supposed insight the future is
Known in the germ of the imagination

A Looking glass outside of time
In a sense a sense outside of common sense
A wild speculative gesture
Point to it

Certain science fiction in fact, in reality
Often magic is no different
From this mystery of science
Science is merely a mirror for looking
As the past is a reflection of seeing

Point to it
Upon the thought of minds
Resides the conflicting
Postulation of outcome beyond gain
And within soul in the future, death itself shall end

Machines consciously come - Intellect agrees it’s feasible
But the ego laughs from vanity - though it is possible
And the world will be and become and indeed is and remains
An interflow of human centred guidance…

But o future, advanced level intensified by action
Through the dynamic of several passion
Including war and the resort to God
On the occasions of answers

It shall remain
Then evermore
The future is what makes us
Look forward
More worthy of the sight
Of which it shall be

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colinsign, i think its a shame that we aren’t in the same writing group/class or something of the sort. i think that, at times like these (this poem) are writing styles and subjects are very similar. of course, you might disagree.

i hope you meant to write “a sense” twice, did you?

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The repition of sense was intended. What did you make of the piece over all? I have been working in this poem for a long time now on and off, I still think a lot of the ideas I am making are still coming through…still being translated into paper…i’ll post the finished version in the future…whenever that maybe…

speak soon