Pieces

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There was a piece of me that was angry.
When it sensed your rage
it was drawn towards it,
and we were angry.

There was a piece of me that was frightened.
When it sensed your fear
it was drawn towards it,
and we were frightened.

There was a piece of me that was miserable.
When it sensed your despair
it was drawn towards it,
and we were miserable.

There was a piece of me that hated.
When it sensed your hostility
it was drawn towards it,
and we hated.

There was a piece of me that loved,
and when it sensed your heart
it was drawn towards it,
and we loved.

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2

Nice rainey. Very nice.

A

3

Alot of feeling in this one. I like that you managed to keep love from seeming one dimensional, which is the challenge.

4

Thanks angel.

Thanks butterfly.

5

…multi-dimensional, iter/intra-dimensional and trans-dimensional all at once.

Nels.

6

Either rainey is a poet major or teacher Or I am being decieved .

7

Thank you for your kind words, Dan. They are very much appreciated. Very much.