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The_Underground_Man · February 6, 2006, 3:48am

I find myself (again
in the belly of a train
alone, I find myself (again
in the belly of a train
alone (Ding Dong, Ding Dong
doors open|close open|close
how many stops, nobody knows
a whole train-cart, empty
but I fill the belly’s void
Do not this, Do not that
Priority this, Priority that-
sometimes, the train speaks to me
but I never understand-
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Evacuation Information
after London)New York) Seven
I wish there was room to sit.

Alexistentialism · February 7, 2006, 12:32am

no need to place the image twice. its the F train. if the image doesn’t work again, then don’t worry about it.

The_Underground_Man · February 7, 2006, 9:32pm

Your picture doesn’t work. What is it?

Alexistentialism · February 8, 2006, 4:18pm

The_Underground_Man · February 20, 2006, 8:30am

Ahh! perfect, yes. (Love the blurr, did you take it yourself?)

Alexistentialism · February 20, 2006, 5:15pm

yes indeed.

Mucius_Scevola · February 20, 2006, 5:19pm

I wonder how the poem would have turned out if you had said that you did understand it…

The_Underground_Man · March 8, 2006, 11:29pm

Me too. Let’s see.

I find myself (again
in the belly of a train
alone, I find myself (again
in the belly of a train
alone (Ding Dong, Ding Dong
doors open|close open|close
how many stops, nobody knows
a whole train-cart, empty
but I fill the belly’s void
Do not this, Do not that
Priority this, Priority that-
sometimes, the train speaks to me,
and I always understand:
Ad Ad Ding Dong Ad Ad
Evacuation Information
after London)New York)Seven
I wish there was room to sit.