Water’s Edge (a Portrait)

Water’s Edge (a Portrait)

This early on a Sunday morning
there aren’t many people
on the beach.

A couple old guys with metal detectors
looking for millions in
lost tourist change.

Please shoot me

if I ever
so much as mention getting
a metal detector.

Seagulls bunch together,
facing the cool, strong breeze.
A couple of them bicker,
but really the only sound is the surf.

It’s late October,
and you can still kick along
barefoot
through the small, breaking waves.

In just a few weeks
the water will be too cold.

A woman passes me,
the wind pulls at her long hair.
She’s skirting the water’s edge,
like me.
Barefoot,
holding her sandals
in one hand.

Pretty. She smiles at me
and I return the smile,

as we pass each other.

Some thirty yards later I stop
and look back.
She’s skirting the water’s edge,

and I wonder what she’s thinking.

.

That’s beautiful. Very somber, very peaceful. I think I’ve lived that scene. Well done.

Thanks very much, Carleas. I really appreciate it.

What was she thinking rainey?

A

Ah, but angel, if I told you that, it would cease to be a poem…

I suppose…

Beautifully observed - as only a neurotic could observe!

Sweet, sentimental and refreshingly alive!
I create transcription of an ‘idling’ Sunday
meandering down to the beach
and catch some observations
that refresh the spirit
like salt air.

=D>

Thanks, Colin!