discerning landscape!
Shadows blue, deference who?
Tell, why, do you shew.
discerning landscape!
Shadows blue, deference who?
Tell, why, do you shew.
And that is precisely why you need me to be your lord.
Tell, why, do you shew
Best to keep the self within?
Bound by need and want.
Bound by need and want
a precarious journey
he blindly pursued.
He blindly pursued
the snake through the garbagebelt
and cut his right foot.
and cut his right foot
still walking the path most trod
despite the hazards
despite the hazards
The heart will conquer in-spite
enormous loss, appearent
despite the hazards
The heart will conquer in-spite
enormous loss, appearent
Enormous loss apparent.
never transparent
but obscure though each lived day
Reminder for haiku–syllables 5-7-5.
Reminder for haiku–syllables 5-7-5.
Enormous loss apparent.
but obscure though each lived day
never transparent
never transparent
Enormous loss for some gain
Shone some one many
never transparent
Enormous loss for some gain
Shone some one many
Shone some one many
Confused Incoherence is
hard to follow well
Fucking blasphemy
Eternally damned just for
Living a life here
hard to follow well
Hard to follow well
Keeping up with the other
Don’t watch them, watch you.
Lev Muishkin:hard to follow well
Hard to follow well
Keeping up with the other
Don’t watch them, watch you.
Don’t watch them, watch you.
Lest timber in thy eye blind
Unto children’s play
Unto child play
…one syllable short
jerkey:Unto child play
…one syllable short
Gad’s I was right, You Are a perfectionist, hands down. Wouldn’t have thought You’d see it.
Clever double down.
MagsJ:…one syllable short
Gad’s I was right, You Are a perfectionist, hands down. Wouldn’t have thought You’d see it.
Guess I’m just a stickler for the rules when it comes to such things…
Unto children’s play
Enough time for adult things
Lost years remain lost
Lost years remain lost
How ever recaptured in time
As they must all ways
Lost years remain lost
How ever recaptured in time
As they must all ways
The second line has eight syllables. Haiku pattern remains 5–7–5.